Reviews for The Magic Within
Guest chapter 3 . 8/11/2012
I have truly enjoyed this so far. I really hope you'll come back to it and share more of this world. Love it!
dowlingnana chapter 3 . 11/28/2011
Talk about intriguing...I think I'm grasping what you have planned in this story but I won't be so naive as to say I completely understand it yet, lol, am I showing my ignorance? This will be a mystery in itself!
dowlingnana chapter 2 . 11/28/2011
Wow, a completely different Edward here. His letter did sound better than the meeting that I can agree with Bella on. He sure does seem to know her a lot too,hmmm, interesting. He sure has a temper as well. Onward and forward to the next mesmerizing chapter.
dowlingnana chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Sounds very, very interesting. A plus for me is that I love anything about Edward and Bella anyway. ;o) I myself am wondering about this Wonderlust. And, as for needing a beta, IDK dear but it seems as if you're doing just great on your own. Luck and anxiously awaiting any and all updates.
show-meh-your-teeth chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
BAH! so good! I haven't read Pride and Prejudice, but this makes me want to!
show-meh-your-teeth chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
This Edward is so different from the Did You Know one! I like this one more :D
show-meh-your-teeth chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
cute. a little bit out there, but well written.
whateverhappenedtogoodfiction chapter 3 . 11/27/2011
So just noticed all the quotes. Where are you finding them? They fit perfectly into your story. I loved the way you described the rain hitting the window. Genius. You are extremely talented llw. Keep up the wonderful work, can't wait for more.
whateverhappenedtogoodfiction chapter 2 . 11/27/2011
You're an amazing writer! LOVE IT.
whateverhappenedtogoodfiction chapter 1 . 11/27/2011
Hmm. This is really different from your entry into The Like, Totally 80's contest. However, I still really like it. It's actually better written, and I love it. :) So happy to have found this gem.
Nicoconsd chapter 3 . 11/25/2011
I am really curious to see if Bella can pick out her trusted people and will Edward be there and know it is her? Looking forward to seeing how that works out :)
sujari6 chapter 3 . 11/16/2011
So Edward will Mr Darcy I assume. Great story. Very unusual and inventive.
Mrs Bingly chapter 3 . 11/16/2011
alice! Do i get a cookie?
Mrs Bingly chapter 2 . 11/16/2011
Edward is like a modern day Darcy. Pure genius, darling.
Mrs Bingly chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
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I'm sorry, Twilight and Pride and Prejudice? I'm pretty sure I am having a literary orgasm! You are supremely elegant in your prose. It reminds me a lot of gothic romance novelists. I cant wait to read the next chapter! I just had to review before hand!
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