Reviews for Charlotte Francine Xavier
Crimson Rouge Rot chapter 15 . 8/6
amazing history, love it
Marie chapter 15 . 6/20
Very pretty.
meowzac chapter 15 . 6/19
That was so goodthank you for writing this story! Pleeeease write a sequel!
bereshit001 chapter 15 . 6/18
I can only repeat what others have already said: this fic is brilliant. I love fem!Charles, her chemistry with Erik, and how you handled telepathy. I admit, I would have loved if you would have written about Erik’s magnetic ability with similar details, but that’s my only nitpick. :)
I’m begging you, continue this fic! You could use an altered story version of the two sequel moves, Days Of Future Past (obviously the “past” part) and Apocalypse. I would really love to see how the Erik/Charlotte duo solves the Sentinel issue, or En Sabah Nur’s reawakening – as well as how they open the school, or how Erik (the badass motherfucker he is) lifts up an entire football stadium or levels Auschwitz with the iron in the earth. :D
Guest chapter 15 . 6/16
Holy shiz I just read that entire thing straight for like 3 hours best thing I've ever read in my life
You're so talented like wow your diction, creativity, JUST EVERYTHUNG WAS SO AMAZING
I loved how you got us to know exactly what all the characters were like. This has got to be the best thing I've ever read. Your writing was so emotional and colorful I felt the same emotions I was reading. THANKS FOR AN AMAZING READ OF MY FAVORITE CHARACTER MAGNETO
littlemsstrawberry chapter 15 . 6/10
Love it. Thanks for sharing
Guest chapter 15 . 6/7
I love this so much gahhhh
Guest chapter 15 . 5/25
Oh my goodness. This was truly amazing. It's 2 am now, couldn't stop reading your story. Hope you have a sequel or something similar. But in any case, write more please
RingwraithYJLOVER chapter 15 . 5/5
This story is brilliant, absolutely brilliant, and extremely well-written. I love this story, and I love how well you wrote Erik and Charlotte. Seriously. Charlotte is my hero. Part of me wishes there was more, but I guess that's what happens with every great story. You want more. Good luck with your other stories! (I really loved the Fem Sherlock and John one).
shugokage chapter 15 . 12/30/2015
Wow amazing job on this story and I always though if a gender swap happened that Erik and Charles/Charlotte could be an interesting pairing!
redQween chapter 15 . 11/4/2015
Kouwen chapter 15 . 10/19/2015
This fanfic had such potential.
Ali D chapter 15 . 10/16/2015
I never comment on stories and that a bad thing I know but I just wanted to tell u that so u know how brilliant your own is- I feel so attracted to their story, you made Charles gender swap so seemless keeping the character but adding great touches of feminine qualities but not de sexualising him/her at the same time- great story, gotta love Eric xox
castielshumanheart chapter 15 . 9/13/2015
This was so lovely to read, I was so captivated I just had to read it all in one sitting. I must congratulate you on you ability to write such believable characterisation. You fundamentally kept Xavier in character while still conveying subtle differences that occur from being a woman in a misogynistic society. These different experiences shaped her actions in an understandable manner that explain why Xavier as a male made different choices. I love how you expanded on Charlotte's powers too, I have always loved the trope of an incredibly powerful pacifist who could rule the world but would rather make people smile.

Erik's character development was also very well done. His concerns and sense of worth were all plausible in the situations he was going through. I liked how you didn't make him completely change just because he feel in love, he still held a hunger for revenge and emotional awkwardness. But he did show a softer side that I liked.

The way in which you developed Erik's relationship with Charlotte was wonderful, I especially enjoyed the build-up and realisations of their feelings for one another. I also respect the fact that you still had Charlotte in touch with her sexuality, I've read so many gender-bender fics that transform highly sexual men into blushing female virgins.

Thank-you for sharing your writing with the public. I enjoyed reading this immensely.
Guest chapter 14 . 9/3/2015
Can we have a version Charlotte/Éric with Days of futur past ?
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