Reviews for Konoha's Sharingan Brothers
LIl Bruh chapter 10 . 12/26/2017
I might be willing to
Guy Fawkess chapter 1 . 8/23/2017
kiss your... cheeks?
dragonfox123 chapter 2 . 3/21/2016
Great chapter and plot
Rain of the Forest chapter 7 . 6/19/2015
Rain of the Forest chapter 4 . 6/11/2015
Wait... castrate... as in literal, or jokingly?
Rain of the Forest chapter 2 . 6/11/2015
So wait, the Sharingan brothers will be Naruto and Sasuke, or Naruto and Itachi? I'm confused
yindragonkiba chapter 9 . 8/31/2014
Love it
2c chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Um... Is English your first language?
If not, you may want to find a native speaker to beta.
If so, you may want to take a few classes.

I'm not a stickler for perfect grammar, but things like "I not hurt Sasuke" is really jarring and takes a person out of the story.
Guest chapter 9 . 5/4/2013
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NaruRikudo chapter 1 . 5/3/2013
Little rough around the edges, could use some more descriptive language to off-site the massive amounts of dialogue, but otherwise a great story, I would suggest looking at some other five like like 'Nightfall' by freowin for ideas on how to use descriptive language, you should also work on building suspense and add flavor; for instance after itachi states it's not him you should put something like 'after Itachi finished his sentence the two elder Uchia sensed a presence behind them, and then a mysterious male voice spoke from behind them' stuff like that really adds to the enjoyment of the story, because without the details it's basically just like reading the shears people get from transcribing conversations, it's dull and lifeless, but like I said, great story with allot of potential if you can just hammer out those details it could be one of the best.
lastone chapter 8 . 3/25/2013
unless it changes minato is a basterd that should die by naruto
Guest chapter 8 . 3/25/2013
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jesuisunarbre chapter 5 . 2/27/2013
Just to tell you, only Naruto can use Kage Bunshins, cause it takes a lot of chakra, so Itachi and Sasuke can only use Bunshins, because they don't have as much chakra as Naruto, you know ('ttebane! I had to translate his mother's verbal tic).
Fan Fan 92555 chapter 8 . 2/27/2013
supert gay sotry
Guest chapter 8 . 11/28/2012
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