Honestly, I love your OC and you've got Masamune's character perfectly in your grasp. The story is already very interesting and funny and I hope that you can continue it soon.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! ONEGAI! It's such a good story!*bows*

I hope you're planning to continue this story as soon as possible, I totally loved the first chapter!

More please!

Please update. This was really good.

Haha, Kiyoko's very cute! It's a shame that this story hasn't been updated in a while but it was entertaining nonetheless so thank you for writing it! :D

Adorable! XD I smiled and giggled all the way. This is very good! I look forward to whatever relationship you have in store for them. She seems like she'd make an excellent little sister, unless you develop her further into a more womanly type, then they'd make a humorous couple. :D Keep working on this one.

I really hope you carry this on orz it's a really good story and I'm pretty desperate to find out who Hachi is!

Update ASAP pleaaassee

This seems interesting! d(_o) Where in the storyline is this happening?

This was adorable, and Kiyoko is such a sweet character. I hope you continue this, it'll be interesting to see where it goes. n_n

I really like this story, you should really update again soon!

loved it cant wait till the next chapter :D

I like the interaction between Masamune and Kiyoko! I can't wait to read more! Update soon!

OMFG! THIS STORY IS SO EFFING AMAZING! PLEASE DO NOT MAKE THEIR RELATIONSHIP SIMPLY PLATONIC.

It's cute. The wolf falling for the lamb. Please make this a full fledged MasamunexOC! PLEASE!

btw Masamune was in character :)