|Reviews for Royal Lovers|
| clalaclanxseena chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
not bad, but could you write a fic about clalaclan and seena as couple(yes, they're my favorite couple for this game, even through both are girls).
since i come across a wonderful fanart made by artemisumi, featuring them, well "hugging" each other, i ship them to death.
so please consider writing a clalaclan x seena fic.
| The Pairing Guy chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
"M/F"? What do you think this is, AFF dot net?
Not a bad start to the story, though as Martin noted the naked sleeping visit doesn't make any sense. Rouen in love is a funky idea(in a good way).
| Martin III chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Hmm, this is the first Shining Tears X Wind fic I've seen in the Games section. I have to say that Rouen isn't one of more interesting characters in the Tears X Wind cast IMO, but your portrayal of him is more or less on target.
This fic is hard to follow since you don't have paragraph breaks whenever the speaker changes. It doesn't help that there a lot of typographical errors, such as: "Things have been since the Soul Blade War", "Souma and Mao are helping out Volg with him inn", "Elywin", "After Rouen stepped down the throne", and "servents quarters".
There are also some bits which don't make any sense, such as the bit about Clalaclan visiting "while he was sleeping, naked". Some explanation for why Rouen the king was lying naked, outside his room, in the middle of the day is due.
Plot seems okay so far, though nothing's really happening yet.