|Reviews for Cold World|
| Obeyashleyk chapter 1 . 8/19
I've actually read this before, but I've never commented. Love this story! ️( - don't know if you can see the heart emoji)
| Corpj123 chapter 24 . 7/23
You dealt with the escalation issues that DBZ suffered from by removing Buu and the Androids, meaning enemies like Cell and such never become an issue. That way, the main villains are the climax of the story, and it results in one long, satisfying piece for a reader to burn though. I did skim a little bit over fight descriptions, but I always do that because, especially in text, fights tend to get repetitive.
Read through it in a morning. It was really fun. Thanks for writing it.
| Eepee chapter 24 . 6/23
Second time reading this, actually realized it just around chapter 15.
Either way, great read once again.
| Guest chapter 24 . 5/10
| Tamia chapter 17 . 2/21
I have a question do you hate gouk
| reptilespit666 chapter 24 . 2/13
I request a sequel sir
| Riddle Wraith chapter 1 . 1/25
Just reviewing here because I already reviewed the last chapter. Just wanted to say (if I didn't before) that I LOVE this. I really want to find stories that do a ruthless, strong Gohan justice, but yours is the only one I've found so far that does (and I found it via happy accident). Anyway, thank you for the awesome story. I loved seeing how the characters differed from canon because of one small event.
| Riddle Wraith chapter 24 . 1/25
Okay, that was AWESOME. This had everything I never knew I wanted and more dude! Holy fucking shit that is awesome. I mean, dude this has Dad!Vegata (kinda) AND a Gohan who was a ruthless Saiyan warrior! Fucking awesome! I'm so glad I found this story before I found anything with even remotely the same premise. This only showed me how it was supposed to be done.
| Alpha Cyborg J chapter 24 . 1/14
And then Dabura and Babidi appeared and killed them all.
| DBZ GIRL 1 chapter 24 . 1/12
i was really hoping that Gohan would keep training instead,but otherwise REALLY good. Also maybe hold up on the cursing a bit HAHAHA ;D
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/11/2016
An insanely delicious fanfic. The plot was as fascinating as it was entertaining. Heck, fanfiction writers definitely do better than the original author himself for bringing the manga back to life!
| Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 24 . 9/28/2016
Hey, this was GREAT! You should TOTALLY write a sequel!
| Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 23 . 9/28/2016
How did Gohan fight Cooler if Gohan kicked Cooler's head off? Did you mean to put King Cold?
| Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 4 . 9/18/2016
Three days?! What if Gohan has to pee?
| TriggerhappySOB chapter 24 . 9/6/2016
Nicely written my friend. Aside from the amount of dialogue in the fights, this one managed to keep me hooked pretty much the whole way through. Besides that, I have no criticisms to give you. Solid 8/10 in my book.