Reviews for Pain of Love
Finalay chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
This is so beautiful. I like how you characterized Fenris. Well done! :)
The Storm Dragon chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Oh that was just beautiful and it hit my sappy heart in the right places.
Bre'Lakor chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Oh this is wonderful :D Short, but wonderful! In a good way! I'm so glad you wrote this, it makes me happy to see more people inspired by Fenders, especially music! I like the unconventional Hawke as well that you've included, it's a nice break from the usual Hawkeses (which are nice too, but a slight difference sometimes is interesting too!)

And, of course, Fenris being a toppy possessive bastard is always awesome... Either way, this was very fun to read and I'm so glad you wrote it! :)
Suilven chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
I find the Fenris/Anders pairing interesting because the inherent clash between their natures gives a writer a lot of freedom to explore the logistics of how the pairing would actually work and still be believable. I think a degree of reluctance on both parts is almost a requirement, and you've definitely captured that. I like this line, in particular:

"Forest green eyes bored into warm amber as if trying to find something to latch onto."
gatorsnacks chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
:D fast forward story with a happy-ish ending made my day :3