Reviews for A Shared Sunday Afternoon
Spartan-059 chapter 1 . 12/2/2013
Thanks for all the laughs. There are so many bad stories on this site, and you make them awesome.
fjeklsnfisodnlkeflns chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Huh? Sorry, but there was a lack of effort and creativity here. Put a little thought into your next work.
DahMastahOfStoof chapter 1 . 9/15/2011

What was that?

Sorry didn't care for it much.

spaced out your words too much

2. The whole story didn't make sense