|Reviews for Je Suis Qui Je Suis|
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/7/2013
Teardles are in my eyebawldles
...I don't even...
This chapter was pretty stinkin funny all serious themes considered.
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/7/2013
Woah! Totally legitimate nosebleed explanation! Goooo author! I have corrections ths time.
carelessly just inside the foyer, and sprinting up to his apartment
The comma before and should be eliminated.
"I'm so tired."
End it with a comma since it's in quotation marks
Forgot a space
Woo ! I only counted three mistakes. Also it would reaaaaaaally help if you could put spaces in your French. Antonia also has a Spanish phrase that needs a space, I think. Translations might be nice too, for us non french speaking peoples.
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/7/2013
Ok, no spotting errors this time, I didn't bother. Too busy enjoying plot. But if there were any, they were small enough as to not block the reading flow. The bear is, for the record kumajirou, right?
While I must cut my praises short, know that I abandon complementing you in favor of reading the next chapter. That should be perhaps the best complinent of them all.
'Till I can stop hitting the next button long enough to give you a good review,
| Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2013
Could I ask some question?"
Should be changed to questions.
Now he detoxes
Add a comma.
His he younger?
Change to Is he younger.
Well now I know why you picked me up! I would like to go home, please."
Add either comma or exclamation mark after well for interjectory puropses.
Ok. Sorry for maybe seeming like an asshat, but you made a great chapter. Those errors were the only thing wrong. I ran through this really quick and picked up the errors I saw, but for maximum amazingness, I would recommend getting a beta. That way these little stinker mistakes can be ironed out before posting.
If you can't find one easily, I, kheelwithit, gladly offer my services.
Still really fucking lazy,
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
That made perfect sense author.
If people say it doesn't, they lower the IQ of your entire street and I as a concerned reader will be forced to reccomend evacuation. Stupidity is contagious through diffusion.
I absolutely love your style. It clearly shows how addled Matthieu is by heroin. I really like the memory tricks he has.
Ever encouraging, but too damn lazy to sign in,
| The Sandman's Daughter chapter 11 . 8/17/2013
That. Was. So. Cute! *squeals*
| Maya Tamika chapter 2 . 12/26/2012
Hey...I don't expect you to correct this, but "mijo" is actually spelled "mihijo". I live in Ecuador and I've lived here since I was three so I speak fluent Spanish. I just thought I'd tell you. :3
| Anna of the Dreamers chapter 11 . 11/9/2012
i loved it! you have a very good writing style! hope i will be able yo do something like this one day!
| Anna of the Dreamers chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
i like it. but when people are talking, make sure not to forget the "..." around each word!
| Francypants69 chapter 11 . 8/30/2012
*sniffles* so sad/awesome and i love it!
| imhereXD chapter 10 . 8/27/2012
ur not te only 1 wif a pervy mind... i do toooo
| Moonlight's Shadow Warrior chapter 11 . 8/4/2012
Eleven roses, eleven chapter. Strange how that worked out. Anyway, loved the story! Keep on writing!
-Moonlight's Shadow Warrior :D
| keisan chapter 11 . 6/26/2012
Beautiful story. So sad but I loved how real it felt, especially the end. It wasn't a super sad ending but it wasn't exactly happily ever after either. I really liked that. I'm glad that Mattie's going to try and make it work with Francis though, it would've been awful if he'd decided not to give him a chance. Your writing's excellent, by the way. :) Well done!
| Meandsushiroll chapter 11 . 6/21/2012
mon dieu qui était magnifique! wow i love love love loved it. i love franada, and this story really was so true to them. i love that Matthew wasn't an emotionless blob, and has his own personality, and that francis wasn't a "rapist" and actually thinks about matthew's wellbeing and doesn't want to take advantage of him. All in all 5 stars!
| Lily Lewis chapter 11 . 5/8/2012
You know what I love? You ended on chapter 11. There were 11 roses in Canada's bouquet. Sorry, I just notice strange coincidences.