|Reviews for Walk Away From The Sun|
| Gill chapter 36 . 1/15/2012
Just after reading this whole story and it's amazing! Ur a fantastic writer absolutely brilliant, so talented the way u write let's me picture everything so clear in my head!
Can't wait for future stories
| narwhayley chapter 36 . 12/24/2011
Okay, it is a little late, but I have finally found time to review on my computer to give you an extra long review, using CAPS and everything.
I loved this chapter. It was so cute with Mick/Gina. I love that their cute little roommates now. And that Gina is so concerned. I like the whole Abigail's death changed him for the better. Makes everything seem more optimistic despite everything that has happened. I like the whole idea of Wendy Flores. She sounds cool. I like the scotch story, It sounds like something they might do. Plus I love how Mick always listens to Gina. Too cute. So was the whole Gian sitting Mick down thing and forcing him to comply with her and Sam's demands. PLUS THE LAST LINE WAS CUTE! Lol. I probably have read that little part from where Gina threatens him to the end of this like a billion times. Such an awesome way to end the story.
Anyways THANKS FOR WRITING! I don't think I can really say that enough because I love CMSB, and you write the most amazing stories. Plus, they are Mick/Gina centric. Which is ALWAYS GREAT! And I'm okay w/a lot of dialogue. You still make it sound good. Anyways I'm very very very very glad that you will keep writing more. I love your stories and again, if you keep writing. I will keep reviewing! (Well eventually). Anyways thanks again for the awesomely amazingful story! Hope you continue :)!
| Lover of Reid chapter 36 . 12/19/2011
That was a great ending. I love Mick's final statement about never wanting to leave Gina's apartment. I would have liked to have seen Prophet trying to pry his way into what was happening since Beth's excuses only worked for the night before. At least Mick didn't explode that badly at finding out that Sam told the story. I can't wait to read your next story.
| Lover of Reid chapter 35 . 12/15/2011
That was great. I can understand Mick's adoptive parents' apprehension to letting Jenna and Cassie see Mick after what happened at the bakery. So let me see if I understand your end message, is this the final chapter? The way that you're talking its like this is all for this story, and that you will soon be writing another. If that is true than I will be watching and waiting for your next new story. I can't wait.
| narwhayley chapter 35 . 12/14/2011
Awwww I kind of like how you ended it with everything. Well I think this is the ending? If it is then first I would like to say this has been an amazing story and I thank you for writing some of the best CMSB FICs ever. In what may be record timing too. And then anyways I like Coops conversation with Cassie. Teenagers are smarter than people think. And then the whole thing with Mick and his foster parents was so sad. And then the thing with Coop was interesting too. I like how everything worked out. Like with the card to Interpol and FBI. And then with your AN it seems like you have a lot of stories planned out. And I will read every single one :P. can't wait till your Christmas fic. And no worries about taking breaks or anything. I am and I will eventually finish my stories. Hope you continue ;)
| narwhayley chapter 34 . 12/14/2011
Gosh I can't believe this story is almost over. Anyways it probably was a bad idea to let William through. I'm glad Abby is dead but not like this. Poor Mick. He just can't catch a break. Anyways great chapter as always. You are always so good with descriptions and stuff and it is especially apparent in this one. Thanks for the update!
| Lover of Reid chapter 34 . 12/14/2011
Oh my God, that was great. I'm actually a little surprised that Mick called Jenna in the first place, but his old habits must die hard. I can't believe that William actually went with Sam to the abandoned bakery. All that carnage within the bakery was unbelievable. Will Mick be convicted for all those people that he killed, Abigail to be more specific. Now that Abigail is dead I wonder what Rais will do next. I can't wait til you update again.
| Lover of Reid chapter 33 . 12/12/2011
That was great. I am really amazed that Mick was able to get up and walk after being in a bed for such a long time, and was then able to maneuver himself out of the hospital. I wonder why he lied to Cooper about the address that was affiliated with Abigail. I can't wait til you update again.
| narwhayley chapter 33 . 12/11/2011
Gosh I forgot to read this chapter. I like that you wrote Mick escaping. It sounds just like him. And then the fact that he did it so well was pretty awesome too. Fun to read and stuff. And then I liked that he eventually called for help and Coop was able to get him to talk. And oh you should do 3 chapters. Not just because I like your story so much, but I wanna see how Mick and Gina react to all of this. Anyways thank you for writing! Hope you continue :).
| narwhayley chapter 32 . 12/11/2011
Yay another chapter. Well I read these when they come out, I just review slow. Anyways, great chapter as always. Gosh poor Mick, he can't catch a break. You wrote all the characters really realistically. Like the parents and the sisters. And then Mick himself is really realistic. You should of written CMSB :P. Anyways thanks for the chapter!
| Lover of Reid chapter 32 . 12/8/2011
That was great. Mick actually took the news of Abigail's treason better than I expected him to. At least he was able to give them a perspective address to check for her. I can't believe that in his weakened state that Mick was able to break away from Casgrove. How in the world did he get past all the gaurds at the doors? I can't wait til you update again.
| narwhayley chapter 31 . 12/7/2011
First of all, yay I reviewed. And secondly 100th :). Okay anyways, great story as always. And another great chapter. I can't believe Abigail got in, but I can believe airport people aren't the best at catching people. And then the fact hat she was a sniper makes everything cool also. And then poor boys. First of all Evan. I would hate if I lost my hand. And then it sucks to be Brett and Palmer too. I loved the whole Liam and Fiona part. Too bad they have to break up. They are too cute. And then I liked that Mick came back to life. That is good :) anyways THANKS for writing! I really love your work! Hope you continue ;)
| Lover of Reid chapter 31 . 12/6/2011
That was great. I can't believe that Abigail was able to return to London. That fact scares me. Liam appears to be stuck in the middle, not getting better, but not getting worse either. At least Mick finally woke up. I can't wait to see how he takes the news that it was Abigail that was the traitor. Needless to say I can't wait til you update again.
| Lover of Reid chapter 30 . 12/5/2011
That was great. I'm happy to see that the team was finally moved back to England, but I'm a little afraid to see what Rais and Abigail have in store for England. I'm curious by the fact that Mick woke up the last time his sisters drew on his cast, and was embarrassed by it, I'm curious as to what they had drawn exactly. I'm happy to see that Mick is starting to wake up. I can't wait til you update again.
| narwhayley chapter 30 . 12/4/2011
I'm glad James remembered something. Even though it kind of sucks how Rais is still after them. But I'm glad they are going back home. The fight sounded like how it would go. With a military transport and turbulence freaking them out and everything. And I loved your descriptions of the family members. Especially Fiona and Jenna. They were really realistic. Lovee this chapyer/story. THANKS for writing! Hope you continue ;)