|Reviews for The Birthday Present|
| Kalinysta chapter 1 . 12/16/2011
Okay, so now why do you think there's "more mistakes than usual?" So far as I can tell, there's no mistakes at all.
And I really liked this! I agree with John though... mysteries are always appreciated. ::snicker::
| LadyMo chapter 1 . 9/22/2011
I liked this alot. I like to think the Doc is Janet. I'm not sure why but I can see her being the one with a wicked sense of humor.
| John chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
I like this alot but you don't need to put anything about you know who or you know who in the summary or anywhere else. Let the reader decide who it is with Jack. :)