Reviews for my happy ending tragidy
Guest chapter 6 . 6/8/2015
this is a pretty good story but you're grammar and spelling mistakes make it kind of hard to read. Maybe you could try and edit you're story before publishing? Just a suggestion. God, I'm such a grammar police _
Lala chapter 3 . 7/27/2013
I can't understand anything.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/8/2013
Um, what happened to Chapter 2? When every I try to go to Chapter 2, only chapter 5 appears.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
very cute!
Teru Hime chapter 2 . 9/23/2011
You still have to work on it because there are still many :D Have a dictionary beside you and look up the words you unsure with. That's what I usually do when I write because I am not fluent myself;) Btw, you spell Yukina's name wrong :D And here is a tip my teacher told me. Find a paper and write down the words you know you spell wrong and when you are finish with the chapter, go through them;) And here is only my point of view, try to make the chapter longer and more filled with information. Describe the places and the feeling of the person:D Sorry about the long review but I hope it helps:D Good luck:D
Teru Hime chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
You should check your spelling mistakes :D There are lots of them. Just saying it. And Yakina's name is Yukina ;)The plot is good:D