Reviews for Shockingly Unsubtle
Soul Neko-Natsu chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
Hahaha so funny. Poor Dawn, I imagine the shame that she had passed. To fav.
1029384756 chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
You should make a sequel about when they have thier first child;) hugs n kisses
princessanime29 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013
Wow Volkner has a weird way of expressing his love for Dawn but itss so sweeet :3 nice oneshot by the way
dark angel chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
aww! cute :)
Wuchen 5 chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Aww I love this pairing soo much! :) Thanks for writing this short and cute fic!

I sort of think it's typical of Volkner to do such a thing, given that he gave Sunnyshore a blackout for going all out with his gym .
Ashura-B chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Ahahahaha! This is certainly very cute, very adorable, very sweet and very humorously entertaining! I adore it!
Charles Grey chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
OH GOD. I LAUGH HARD.

Okay! Who cares if this is crack pair and there's a few fan of it...it doesn't stop them from being so adorable when they're paired up :3 *IGNORE THIS*

This way of proposing reminds me...Special A scene, and you make me realize that it would be so damn adorable if you apply this to Volkner-Dawn :3. I also love the last line of Dawn's thought...oh God. X'DD

Anyway, this is a very entertaining fanfic. Please write more ! *w*
Lily chapter 1 . 9/21/2011
Aww Rose I love this pairing soo much and watching you write this just made my day,you are my favorite writer and pokemon gray my favorite fanfic thank you soooo much for doing this, I hope you'll do more of this :D
KHLegacy chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
Wow Volkner sure knows how to put on a show! good job!