Reviews for Little Bakery of Horrors |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What a great story! There are some grammar and capitalization mistakes but I hardly notice them since I get so caught up in the story every time I read it! This was even better than Cupcakes, you should make stories of Pinkie killing the other three! So good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm such a sick ducky X3 Though the part with Angel bunny broke my heart, I have 2 bunnies myself |
![]() ![]() Wow that was short it needs to be longer, and more torture pleas |
![]() ![]() This was okay i guess, it needs more Gore and pain️️ |
![]() ![]() This was kinda scary, where can I find twighlight's run It could have been better like a lot better |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good, it's like an alternate version of ''Cupcakes!'' So many MLP creepypastas turned out to be so terrible or really just dumb takes on the few good ones, (En Den Rarutee stabed Sweaty Bell with some sowin needulls and sharp dimunds oooo scary) but this was super well written and definitely sent chills up my spine. Good job friend! |
![]() ![]() Kudos! You managed to surprise me a time or two and I thought that was impossible by this point. And I don't see what everyone's beef with this is... obviously it's just a fanfic, not like the canon Pinkie did this, and there are plenty of fanfics where Pinkie and the gang go save lost puppies and such. Will there eventually be a chapter for everyone? And you know what would be an epic way to end it? If the last victim says something that makes her realize the set isn't complete without herself, and she comes up with some complicated contraption that will put her through an equally horrible end. |
![]() ![]() Creative,yet disturbing |
![]() ![]() ![]() ;; At least you didn't do Derpy...(My fave character) I love the whole cupcakes thing but it scares the crud out of me |
![]() ![]() Why would someone make this? This is the sequel too, and the original "cupcakes" is not the best fanfic. Pinkie Pie is also by far the BEST pony on the show. I do not approve. |
![]() ![]() I FUCKING LOVE U... BUT WHY FLUTTERSHY ... |
![]() ![]() I usually imagine the stories in my head, so when I read gory ones... I usually scream, "YOU'LL NEVER CATCH ME, PINKIE!" when I run past dark places. |
![]() ![]() Eww eww eww why sweetie belle plz don't kill the cutie mark crusaders |
![]() ![]() that was amazing I would love it is you added a few more chapters to the story and btw you know when you said about fluttershy getting a rainbow cupcake because rainbow dash was the last pony to be killed, well when you gave Rarity fluttershy's cupcake shouldn't it of been apple jacks cupcake as pinkie killed her next. Or did she not make apple jack into cupcakes?! Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No no no no no CURSE YOU AND EVERYTHING TOU STAND FOR! Even though this was well written, PINKIE WOULD BEVER DO ANY OF THIS! CANT PEOPLE REALIZE THAT! |