Reviews for Endless Nightmares
Apsara chapter 6 . 5/20/2013
Hey it's a great story...i think you should continue with it...waiting for you to write more))))
Guest chapter 6 . 7/30/2012
Next chapter? This is amazing!
LunaEvanna Longbottom chapter 6 . 7/10/2012
I really like it and it's cool but you've forgotten that Max cant speak let alone shout and she wouldn't have been able to hear anyone if she lost her hearing aids. BUT it's still a very good story.
LozziepopBabyXxX chapter 7 . 5/2/2012
Keep going!
Lauryll chapter 6 . 1/15/2012
I demaned you to write more. I am going to wait forever! I love this story, it's really like it's told my Max. By the way, I'm no physic, but I think Chris is acting a little strangely. Like maybe...Leena? Nah, it's a crazy thought, but still, I think he is! I love this story, please write more! I know this is stupid, but would you mind reviewing my own Leena story?
Eveer13 chapter 6 . 1/2/2012
pleaes oh keep these chaptrs up..
tomboy2012 chapter 6 . 11/9/2011
Hey, so before I start my review, I just remembered something. Is Max deaf in your story? You probably mentioned something about it earlier, but is she? Just been pondering that for a while, is all.

Aw, young love :)

Max and Chris are so cute, and they both know that they like each other. Who's Marshall? Did he date their mother? Was he just another cop? Because, honestly, even if he is a good guy, I'm not exactly sure how much I like this guy...

Kate annoys me. Why wouldn't you know where your child is? Goodness...

But Danny, oh how will I go on? He's missing and Leena's out there! Who knows what the hell might happen next? Update soon, please!
DarknessSeeps chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
To S I'm still writing this story but it is taking a while and fanfiction isn't working on my computer -.- annoying much! I will upload soon, i promise.
S chapter 5 . 10/19/2011
This is the end of the story and this story ian't what you said it would be.
tomboy2012 chapter 3 . 9/18/2011
It is so sad to see how the Colemans are acting now. So they think that it might be Leena who is involved with the murders. It might be possible. I feel bad for Max, because even though she is messed up, she isn't as messed up as Kate. Daniel is messed up, but from the last part of the chapter, he doesn't seem as messed up as Kate it.

Eager for more,

tomboy2012 chapter 2 . 9/16/2011
SUCH DEPRESSION! I LOVE IT! Kate is pretty sad, but you'd think she'd pull herself back together for the sake of her children. Is Chris the one that makes her feel better? Ohhh...

Flat is apartment, right? Just checking.

So there is a chance that Leena might still be around, hm...

That would be pretty interesting, but I don't really know what would happen because Max and Daniel and Kate are already so messsed up...the worst Esther could do is kill them, right?

Cool, you updated right away, and I get to read it. I'll be here for the next chapter, too ;)
tomboy2012 chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
This is really good, only because no one has really done a story with Max all depressed like this. She is older, which should be interesting to see what she is like. I feel bad about Kate and Daniel, especially about Max cutting herself. Kate is so out of it, and Daniel can't help. I don't think that this is a one shot, because it doesn't sound like one :)

Very well written with detail (well, I can tell that you are trying to not give too much away in the begining), and I enjoyed it. I will be looking forward to the next chapter.