Honestly, Draco's idea for the tournament is pretty original, but it's frustrating that Harry is manipulated by everyone, it's like he's willing to give everyone endless opportunities. In addition to the toxic romance of this “ice queen” being very stressful, since Fleur is also labeled I think it would be better than her.

Man I do like reading this story, I think that it is fantastic.
Although, each time I read this and get to this chapter I'm left a little more disappointed each time. Not because it's a bad chapter- it's a very good chapter in my opinion - but because their is no next chapter after it. It's been over 3 years and were now in 2024 and I am wondering if this story is on Haitus or if it has been stopped all together, both would be a horrible thing to happen to such a brilliant fanfiction. It's not my place to judge the speed of your writing and you could simply have other more important duties in the real world but I'm anxious to see this continue and find out what happens next.
Looking forward to the next chapter hope it comes soon.

re read this beauty of a fic. I hope you get the muse for it again and come back!

amazing story, I've been reading in this fandom for a while and it's rare to see someone deliver a triwizard based story that feels so fresh. Really glad you decided to write this, hope you continue updating.

Brilliant, I have loved reading this fanfic and seeing what you have done with the familiar characters, unfamiliar characters and the added OC characters (like Stephanie).
Love the magic Harry's working on to help him in the second task.
Looking forward to the next chapter, I hope it does come soon.

Totally loving the fic... Hope you update soon... Tc and stay safe... :)

Wow, it has been some time since I've read a fic of this quality. It was definetly different than I expected and contained lots of original ideas - which I feel is hard to find in this site.
Hope to see updates :))))

I truly loved the whole fic, and I really can’t find anything to give criticism on other than some grammatical and punctuational errors, and only barely because honestly they hardly matter
I’m looking forward to the next chapter!

something i wanted to clarify/clear up

in a previous chapter or two, you have sally anne perks in the wrong house, she's in gryffindoor, not slytherin

gellert grindelwald caused WW2, not the revolutionary war.

the whole seer astoria thing is stupid and really lowers the fic

hermione is not some powerful or badass or frightening witch, harry really has no reason to be afraid of her, its laughable

also, how the hell did harry say or do anything worse to ron? because harry stood up for himself and refused to allow ron to blame harry for his own problems? yea, ron is pathetic and really needed someone to shut his mouth long before now

and all of the reviewers who claim that harry is out of line or ron lost some people too? are they serious? this is FOURTH year, not SEVENTH, ron has not lost anyone yet, and he still, even in seventh year lost far less than harry

goblins are pretty damn horrid, tbh

the whole familliar thing sounds weird and wacky as hell, tbh

really? astoria is a seer? thats dumb af, tbh

two things

1.) i actually don't think the gryfindoors are as bad as you claim them to be

2.) harry is way to ok with daphne, especially after she just insulted his friend

arcturus black was married to melania black nee macmillan, not lucretia

not sure who lucretia is, tbh

harry is such a fucking retard bro

he literally forgives everyone, even when he has no reason to

he is to moronic and incompetent to look shit up for himself

hermione, really? making her out to be this amazing being, who can do no wrong?

actually harry always beats hermione in defense

how can harry not even see or think daphne is manipulating him? is he truly that thick and naive?