That was a good running commentary of Charlies' worries about how to be a good father to a teenage Bella. Little did he know what his life was going to be like now.

Awwww!

This was Charlie to a "T." Great job in capturing his nature.
I'd never thought too much about his "pre Bella jitters," but u did an amazing job. This is absolute canon.
:)

awwww... well i think i never really paid attention to how charlie might feel about the situation... but this is really good.. :)

This was fabulous. :)

It just need to be longer we need to know how felt and how she felt about being there and how he thought she look

Congratulations! It is a great story. Really nice look at Charlie.

Excellent story. Really sweet. Thank you for this.

sooo cute! I really enjoyed reading your story :D

I loved your story. Thank you so much for writing it. Charlie is one of my favorite characters and you captured him perfectly.

I'm new the fan fiction world and the first dozen stories weren't really Twilight at all. Same names but that was about it. Thanks for staying true the characters. I can't wait to read more by you.

Bella thought Charlie called her Isabella behind her back, he should refer to her as that to other people.

Intesting POV, are you going to continue? I would be interesting to see what Charlie thinks about stuff.

good job! I love Charlie! and even more, I love canon and mostly canon AU stuff, always looking for more, especially with E&B

Awe that's a for sure keeper

Reb

You have provided a much-needed, always neglected part of our favorite story! The background, of Charlie's preparations for Bella's moving in, was never much explored. This was great, and so very touching! Misted up my eyes, I don't mind telling you. Hearing Charlie's thoughts was just right, expands and completes the whole thing!

This was very nice to read. You describe Charlie as I always imagine him to be.