|Reviews for A Primitive Odyssey|
| ED chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
i like that :)
| Hippo Scuba chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
Wow! This is awesome. The "Dawn of Man" scene is definitely one of my favourite scenes from any movie. I wish there was more attention paid to it in the form of writing, and the like. Always fun to fin one though. Thanks!~
| orionastro chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
amazing story, you shoul continue , to see waht kind of humanity would evolve.
| ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 1/1/2012
Very cool. I particularly liked the description of the simulated savannah. The last line was also great.
| Nova Sinfonia chapter 1 . 10/8/2011
Yay! Another 2001 story! I like that you go back to the beginning of the book/movie, bringing us into the early humans' experience. I was intrigued by the simulated world in the monolith, and why Moonwatcher and Stargazer were brought there - would they not have met otherwise?
This is just style, but I thought there were too many words in quotation marks. I understand you're talking about things the characters don't know (like what a day is, for instance) but maybe choosing only a few words to put in quotes would work better.
But great story! And a nice philosophical ending: how much have we progressed, anyway?