Reviews for Love's Betrayal
intstebri chapter 4 . 5/15/2007
I'm so sad that you gave up that one!

Could we do something to bring you back?

Just ask. It will be done.

Sorry I wasn't there in 2002, but I saw that you had updated some stories recently. So, I try...

Please come back!
jfg207 chapter 3 . 3/12/2007
iI'm glad you didn't have Logan got any farther. Because that just not him. I know he had been pushed to the utmost when he saw Alec hugging Max but like all men he got jealous and when he confronted Max with that she did the only thing the help keep him alive. But he didn't think at all that Max was not like that. After being at Manticore where did she come to? And if there was something between her and Alec why didn't it start at Manticore. Seems jealousy out weighs clear thinking in male or female.

When are you going to continue?

Jeanette
Dutch chapter 4 . 10/21/2006
I hope you will finish this story. It is a very interesting story, not quite within their characters. However, it shows that Logan was not in his right mind due to the alcohol he had consumed. That's a good excuse for him. Max has a good excuse for lying to Logan because she wanted to keep him safe. Two wrongs do not make a right. But I am sure that love will win in the end.

Are you still interested in DA writing? Hope so, I enjoy your writing very much.

Dutch
AliasSpyCrazy chapter 4 . 1/9/2006
I’m wondering if you’re ever going to update. I hope you do because I really enjoyed reading this. It’s so damn sad and I feel so bad for Max. I mean what she must feel. I hope they work things out, its just wow, poor, poor Maxie. Stupid ass Logan, I cant believe he did that. I hope things get better between the two, that’s if you ever post another chapter. Keeping my fingers crossed
Liz chapter 4 . 2/7/2005
This was a different, but really good twist in the M/L saga. I am interested in reading more, if there is any. Great job on this one!
crybaby452 chapter 4 . 2/6/2005
hey your story is so good its hard to find max and logan storys lol. keep up the good work i am egarly waiting to read the rest of the story.
Ringwraith9 chapter 4 . 3/15/2004
Ge, does someone like dark angel? Wow, you can write. (happy dance). But the syrupy angst is overcoming my bitchy powers must close window now.
Astacia chapter 4 . 12/20/2003
Man this is good. It's hard to think that Logan would ever hurt Max, but you write so wonderfully that it's still a great fic to read. Update soon.
Dusty Charlie'sAngelx656 chapter 4 . 4/8/2003
you are incredibly right about that M/A-M/L thing...my story, What it Means to Be Normal (no plugging, swear on my future DA DVD collection) didn't do so well w/ reviews...and I gotta say, I love this story...the way you painted Logan...god, it was something I had never thought about for him, but it was just amazing! and I loved all your other stories too...I'm gonna go review those if I haven't already lol
Michelle Drake chapter 4 . 12/15/2002
Hi there! I feel so special getting a dedication, so in my place as being your sounding board ;) PLEAE WRITE MORE! :) I beg of you! You know I love your writing, and especially this story :D Great Work!
Guest chapter 4 . 10/5/2002
I like the tension ay got goin in this they have to learn to trust each other and them selves M/L all the way!
StarDust43 chapter 4 . 9/18/2002
Yes i do think Logan is getting off WAY too easy and I'm very much looking forward to that plot climax.

Thanks heaps for updateing and please don't keep us waiting to long:-)
jadaa's angel chapter 4 . 9/13/2002
Gots to take a page out their book.

M/L! M/L! M/L! M/L! M/L! M/L! M/L! M/L! M/L! M/L!

M/L FOREVER. Max and alec is... nasty. how can a girl sleep with a guy that looks like her brother? UH. gross. sickness! Plus the tiny little fact that M/Aers ~ it disgusts me just to type it~ care to overlook...

SHE'S IN LOVE WITH LOGAN. END OF STORY. PERIOD.

I feel better now. Beening with fellow M/Lers helps. you get me.

I LOVE THE Story. great, as normal. I pleased to see the darker stuff gets reviews too.
mia chapter 4 . 9/13/2002
Hey thanks for this new chapter! It's a great story, keep it up...!
MarcelDark chapter 4 . 9/13/2002
Hi, very well writen fic. I hope u update soon. Very good topic too, I think that what Logan did is really awful, but if I were in his place I surely would be extremely pissed off and wouldn't deal with it as nicely as he did in the show, but I wouldn't try to rape her either. But what Max did was also very bad, I think both parts are guilty and hope they work it out. :D
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