Reviews for Temporary Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() very nice and with a sweet ending |
![]() ![]() "Harry sometimes could be a bit sensitive, and Sirius had to be reminded" I think Sirius would be better actually. He was raised with people who treated him badly too; he understood... I'm glad Harry is doing better. He deserved happiness so much. |
![]() ![]() If Harry isnt scared of Sirius now, he should live with them :) |
![]() ![]() Vernon deserves muggle prison. Hope they send him there. |
![]() ![]() I love Filius here :) And I'm glad Remus knows Sirius is innocent! Shouldn't he go to ask? |
![]() ![]() Lily would have approved, she'd know her son was better here." Except Lily trusted and asked Severus. Not molly. |
![]() ![]() Molly? That's a terrible idea. They are already outnumbers 7 to 2 in their house, and most of her parenting is yelling and feeding! Sigh. Why not Narcissa then? |
![]() ![]() What is wrong with Severus? It's a scared abused child and he's not even reassuring him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A rare portrayal of a child's journey. While somewhat unconventional I found it quite delightful. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3...? that's way too young... no matter the age it's equally cruel but maybe 5 or 6 might be more.. reasonable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. I think the grammar for Harry's POV was perfect. It really brought me into his headspace and his emotions were much more real to me. Thanks for the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'm pretty sure I have no tears left to shed, spent the whole time reading this crying. Thank you so much, it was therapeutic, to say the least. |
![]() ![]() ![]() god i know the grammar is intentional but it just makes this impossible to read & that really sucks bc i was enjoying this a lot |
![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() okay I'm not going to lie...I love it when he calls Snape his man that's adorable |