Reviews for Temporary Home
Slytherin Princess34 chapter 30 . 11/21
AWWWW Please make a sequel!
BoleynGirl chapter 3 . 10/24
I just found this and it is love at first site:-) I can't wait to see where this is going.
adafrog chapter 30 . 10/23
Lovely, thanks.
Fenris Jin chapter 4 . 10/8
Maybe Severus should have explained better that Carrot isn't going to Kitty Heaven. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 3 . 10/8
The broken grammar really is killing me some brain cells. See? XD

Sorry for mentioning it again. It really is not necessary for Harry to be narrated in such a way. I really hope Harry can get better soon. I might not make it until the end of the story if it goes on any longer. XD

I'd like to see things from Harry's perspective, but the broken narrative really is getting on me. Thank Merlin the narration followed Severus, it will have to tide me over for next chapters. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 10/8
I'm not sure the broken grammar was needed. I could understand the need for it to show Harry's mental state.. Unfortunately, all it gave me was a headache. xD

Perhaps Harry can make internal dialogue with broken grammar instead of the narration. It really was hard to read.. and Wobbi is giving me a headache too. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 10/8
For a mute.. Harry is adorable.. It must be a kid thing. xD

This sounds like a promising read. :)
Mike.Delphi chapter 22 . 8/26
If you write Sirius anything like Canon, THIS can only end in a gunshot.
Mike.Delphi chapter 7 . 8/26
Traumatized children are often stunted in speech and sometimes, theoretically, thought patterns. I see where you are going with this. I take it you've had... Doubters?
Calmzone1 chapter 30 . 8/8
Well done, tough writing with the simplistic language you have Harry using.
A.A.wasker chapter 30 . 8/6
I loved the idea of him in a couple of years but I hated not showing me how sev and Remus developed there love feelings ** but I wish it was longer and sadly you didn't give severus justice
A.A.wasker chapter 29 . 8/6
Harry's birthday again
A.A.wasker chapter 28 . 8/6
I liked the smart way of making him call them uncle but in Italian ( laughs) you really gave your thought into it a d that's amazing I love it when people like you are devoted to the story like that , and god how I felt to angry from these scumbags ...ah I wanna kill them and torture them ...
A.A.wasker chapter 27 . 8/6
okay head went far but okay ...are they meeting his aunt and uncle ?! These horrid people ( screams angry ) I wish they are dead !
A.A.wasker chapter 26 . 8/6
Awww no Luna's mom is dying ( crys ) please don't break the cute happy Harry and Luna
...and why do I feel there is a catch about sev and Remus going to have a day off ? Could it be !( gasp )
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