Reviews for Temporary Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really was interested in this story when I first found it... but the way you wrote Harry's pov... I just cant. Im sorry. Its quite good other than that and really wish it didnt bother me so much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was quite the lovely tale! I love how much Harry loves animals, and how much the Centaurs have taken to him, and taught him! It was a good place to end the story. Harry is happy, feels like he really has a family, and has a great group of didn't appear to be any sign of manipulative Dumbledore, for which I am grateful! Not that Severus, Remus, Sirius, Lucius, Narcissa, the Weasley family or the Tonks or Bones families, not to mention the Centaurs would tolerate the type of interference Albus typically employs. Kudos for A very enjoyable read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice and with a sweet ending |
![]() ![]() "Harry sometimes could be a bit sensitive, and Sirius had to be reminded" I think Sirius would be better actually. He was raised with people who treated him badly too; he understood... I'm glad Harry is doing better. He deserved happiness so much. |
![]() ![]() If Harry isnt scared of Sirius now, he should live with them :) |
![]() ![]() Vernon deserves muggle prison. Hope they send him there. |
![]() ![]() I love Filius here :) And I'm glad Remus knows Sirius is innocent! Shouldn't he go to ask? |
![]() ![]() Lily would have approved, she'd know her son was better here." Except Lily trusted and asked Severus. Not molly. |
![]() ![]() Molly? That's a terrible idea. They are already outnumbers 7 to 2 in their house, and most of her parenting is yelling and feeding! Sigh. Why not Narcissa then? |
![]() ![]() What is wrong with Severus? It's a scared abused child and he's not even reassuring him. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A rare portrayal of a child's journey. While somewhat unconventional I found it quite delightful. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() 3...? that's way too young... no matter the age it's equally cruel but maybe 5 or 6 might be more.. reasonable |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well done. I think the grammar for Harry's POV was perfect. It really brought me into his headspace and his emotions were much more real to me. Thanks for the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well, I'm pretty sure I have no tears left to shed, spent the whole time reading this crying. Thank you so much, it was therapeutic, to say the least. |
![]() ![]() ![]() god i know the grammar is intentional but it just makes this impossible to read & that really sucks bc i was enjoying this a lot |