Reviews for Temporary Home
silverose29 chapter 30 . 3/15/2013
good job i like this story alot
Your Worshipfulness chapter 2 . 2/21/2013
The bad grammar is annoying and unnecessary. You should be able to convey abuse using descriptive language and thought processes and not rely on a crutch. Also I don't see how deleting pronouns and using improper tenses would convey an abused mental state. It just makes him sound like he's stupid.

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emthereble chapter 30 . 2/18/2013
It was Brillant !
hpd chapter 13 . 2/17/2013
awww this is sad bu realistic it mackes me want to cry
cyiusblack chapter 30 . 2/16/2013
cool story
CrowX chapter 3 . 2/12/2013
Good story, but even though you explained about the grammar in Harry's part, I can't keep on reading. It's just too annoying. I would understand if they were direct thoughts of Harry, but it is indirect and frankly, gives me a headache. So sorry, I won't be able to read the chapters 4 to 30. Pity, since it seemed like a promising story.
Guest chapter 22 . 1/12/2013
You still have the name Ian for Portia husband, is it supposed to be John
NZGirl24 chapter 30 . 1/4/2013
i love this story even tho parts of it makes me cry
Asymmetrical Freak chapter 30 . 10/6/2012
This is a really excelete story, thank you for writing it. I usually read recoverey stories where Harry's a teen but it was nice to read a younge one for a change :D thank you, you made my saturday
Iris-Reid92 chapter 30 . 10/4/2012
Awesome story. :)
Rachel chapter 3 . 9/5/2012
You're doing great, keep it up. The Harry view point is very well written. Don't let anyone give you crap about it
Guest chapter 11 . 8/29/2012
I love the story so far. I loved your other one as well (just finished it). Great work! :)
Bribles chapter 30 . 8/22/2012
This was a wonderful story. You have a talent for writing. I hope to read more of your work.
tydeerose chapter 30 . 8/3/2012
loveeeeeeeeeeeeee it! i would love a sequel! you should put the sequel up for adoption im sure one of your readers would love to continue it! i wonder what house he would be in i think the house of the snakes but thats just cuse thats my fav house XD
Guest chapter 4 . 7/18/2012
You make my heart break. ; ;
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