Reviews for Temporary Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Second time reading and still love :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Pups! Wolves have pups, since they're part of the canine family. Bears have cubs. I guess it could technically be different for werewolves, but that seems unlikely to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! |
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![]() ![]() The end was really accurate, I like it, as the whole story :) Truly enjoyed it, thank you |
![]() ![]() Ahh, finally, Harry said something out loud! Oh, this is so cute... :) Love the centaur thing, as Harry come with them and then hold hand with Severus. God knows he deserves a bit of trust from Harry. This story is really nice :o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Im a bit confused with kind Malfoys, but I got used to them now :)... First B-day for Harry was so cute! Love it, really nice story.:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh shit, this is so sad and severe...:-( Poor, poor Harry. You made me cry, you know. Hope Harry will be better soon. But Im not sure if it happens while living with Weasleys? :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() This piece is a bit scary, how Harry thinks in easy sentences and how he behaves... I feel truly sorry for him. Its really nice beginning of a story (of course I dont mean the abuse thing, but like the people around Harry trying to help him and all). Going to the next chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i was rereading your story and u have the name of miss Portia boyfriend as Ian not john. Thanks for the great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story. I don't know how it was written originally but you did a great job with it. It was sweet and heart warming and sad. Everything a good story should be. I hope you write more. |
![]() ![]() Sorry to lazy to sign in but thought you story was great:) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Have to say as sad and dark as the back story was and the fact that you touched on some severe child abuse, this was a wonderful story. I think you hit the ending perfectly as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One thing i dont understaand is how adults can violapte children under the age of 18. Its sick and twisted, and im glad that Vernon and Petunia lost Dudley in your story. Im also glad you introduced Padfoot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Most enjoyable. Well done. |