Reviews for Temporary Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. I'm enjoying it. (Perhaps a little slow for some readers.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! That's a great story. Harsh, yes, but very well written. The switch in grammar perfectly conveys Little Harry's childish, partly broken mindset. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the story.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...couldn't all of the young children be schooled together even if its only the little ones around Harry's age, especially if Remus teachs them. As it would certainly help Harry to get more use to being around other children...seeing them learn but also playing with them. Though the children would have to be told not to touch Harry etc. Even if the preschool children were not taught by Remus, I still think it would be great if Harry had more time with Luna and Draco. So when will Neville arrive on the scene, hmm? I can hardly wait to see what will happen when little Harry finally meets Sirius Black or rather Padfoot? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm kinda surprised that neither Severus nor Remus thought about reading History of Hogwarts because sure'll there must be a children's verision of the book? Perhaps then Harry might feel more at easy outside of Severus (and Remus's) quarters. It might also enable Harry to understand about the Heads of Houses the lions, the snakes, badgers and ravens...whilst its true that at Harry's age he might not understand it all but I do think it would be better if they did. Its amazing that of all the people now in little Harry's life that he chose to give his first spoken words to Charlie! I must admit I thought that either Remus or the Centaurs would be the ones he'd first speak to. How do most magicl parents explain about magic and the wiza-rding world to there children at Harry's age...how did the likes of Lucius or Arthur & Molly explain it to there child-ren...then perhaps Severus & Remus should take a leaf from these people? Some how I get the feeling that Harry is going to learn about/or put together the puzzle about why Remus goes away just before the moon? |
![]() ![]() The story is great and I love the ending. I always imagined Luna's mum to be really happy all the time and full of life. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god! This story's so sad! It made made me cry nearly all along, it really upset me, when I was reading Harry's reactions, state of mind and thoughts, he reminded me some of the kids I took care at hospital! It really upset, you're really really really talented, oh my god! Congrats for the beautiful fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it even if there was no slash. it was an emotional and inspiring read. well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you did do this story justice well done! i hope perhaps someday a sequel could be made |
![]() ![]() ![]() What an amazingly sweet story. Even with the abuse. The healing of Harry & dealing with such a horrible subject was treated & written about so well. The parts where what Harry was thinking was a masterpiece & bought to the front his fears & rationale of his behaviour. Thankyou |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww Harry with Luna, Neville and Susan loved him learning about Mineva must be confusing and awww with mooney |
![]() ![]() ![]() luna and harry and the gifts almost made me cry just how well they know them. i work with kids who have disabilities. most are nonverbal and this just showed that action can speak louder then words and Miss Anne awww |
![]() ![]() ![]() as dangerous as it could have benen i still awwww at the picture of mooney curled up with harry. and i love that Minerva has figured out that she does calm harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww luna such a sweetheart and Minerva is good seems to appear in her cat form when harry needs her most |
![]() ![]() ![]() Charlie bless him he is anaamazing older brother he is so under used in stories i am glad and happy when i do see him |