Reviews for Temporary Home
Marj123 chapter 17 . 4/8/2012
Very nice. I'm enjoying it. (Perhaps a little slow for some readers.)
Malicean chapter 30 . 3/19/2012
Wow! That's a great story.

Harsh, yes, but very well written. The switch in grammar perfectly conveys Little Harry's childish, partly broken mindset.
Kimi Lowe chapter 30 . 3/17/2012
Love the story..
Griffin Raven chapter 22 . 3/9/2012
Hmm...couldn't all of the young children be schooled together

even if its only the little ones around Harry's age, especially

if Remus teachs them. As it would certainly help Harry to get

more use to being around other children...seeing them learn but also playing with them. Though the children would have to

be told not to touch Harry etc.

Even if the preschool children were not taught by Remus, I still think it would be great if Harry had more time with Luna

and Draco. So when will Neville arrive on the scene, hmm? I can hardly wait to see what will happen when little Harry finally meets Sirius Black or rather Padfoot?
Griffin Raven chapter 18 . 3/9/2012
I'm kinda surprised that neither Severus nor Remus thought about reading History of Hogwarts because sure'll there must be a children's verision of the book? Perhaps then Harry might feel more at easy outside of Severus (and Remus's) quarters. It

might also enable Harry to understand about the Heads of Houses

the lions, the snakes, badgers and ravens...whilst its true that at Harry's age he might not understand it all but I do think it would be better if they did.

Its amazing that of all the people now in little Harry's life that he chose to give his first spoken words to Charlie! I must

admit I thought that either Remus or the Centaurs would be the ones he'd first speak to.

How do most magicl parents explain about magic and the wiza-rding world to there children at Harry's did the likes of Lucius or Arthur & Molly explain it to there child-ren...then perhaps Severus & Remus should take a leaf from these people? Some how I get the feeling that Harry is going to learn about/or put together the puzzle about why Remus

goes away just before the moon?
RemySevvyFan chapter 30 . 3/4/2012
The story is great and I love the ending.

I always imagined Luna's mum to be really happy all the time and full of life.
Fantom-you're-the-best chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
Oh my god! This story's so sad! It made made me cry nearly all along, it really upset me, when I was reading Harry's reactions, state of mind and thoughts, he reminded me some of the kids I took care at hospital!

It really upset, you're really really really talented, oh my god!

Congrats for the beautiful fic
veldraphone chapter 30 . 2/19/2012
i loved it even if there was no slash. it was an emotional and inspiring read. well done!
Hope06 chapter 30 . 2/17/2012
you did do this story justice well done! i hope perhaps someday a sequel could be made
jules3677 chapter 30 . 2/17/2012
What an amazingly sweet story. Even with the abuse. The healing of Harry & dealing with such a horrible subject was treated & written about so well. The parts where what Harry was thinking was a masterpiece & bought to the front his fears & rationale of his behaviour. Thankyou
Hope06 chapter 24 . 2/17/2012
awwww Harry with Luna, Neville and Susan

loved him learning about Mineva must be confusing

and awww with mooney
Hope06 chapter 21 . 2/17/2012
luna and harry and the gifts almost made me cry just how well they know them. i work with kids who have disabilities. most are nonverbal and this just showed that action can speak louder then words

and Miss Anne awww
Hope06 chapter 19 . 2/17/2012
as dangerous as it could have benen i still awwww at the picture of mooney curled up with harry.

and i love that Minerva has figured out that she does calm harry
Hope06 chapter 18 . 2/17/2012
awww luna such a sweetheart

and Minerva is good seems to appear in her cat form when harry needs her most
Hope06 chapter 17 . 2/17/2012
Charlie bless him he is anaamazing older brother

he is so under used in stories i am glad and happy when i do see him
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