What a lovely story. Harry was just adorable and I loved how everyone tried to help him.

Ug. This is horrible. You claim to have done it on purpose, but I can’t imagine anyone deliberately ruining their story. Why would you make it difficult to read? Are you trying to chase off readers? Are you secretly illiterate?

I get the idea of what you claim to be trying, but it would only work if the story narrative was exclusively from Harry’s perspective. This tells me that you have no idea what you’re doing.

I think I’ll take a hard pass on this, and anything else you’ve written.

Excellent. Harry was totally believable as an abused child, his worries about being sent away normal. Once you've found a home where you feel safe, it's natural to fear it being taken away. Sad that Harry & Sirius never formed that close close relationship that Sirius wanted, bit glad that Sirius was smart enough to accept sharing his life, not wanting to completely be with Harry, to the exclusion of his Moony & Zio. Enjoyed immensely & recommend. Thanks.

Loved this story!

Chapter 23: I was so hoping Harry would be drawn to Sirius as he was to Remus. Maybe later?

sweet.
nnnnice fic

WHere is bill weasley?

it is cute from harry perspective

I like how you write

I like your story, it’s fun&funny.
The kid speek from Harry POV isn’t my fav but it does make sense so go for it! I do have a problem with Harrys inability to remember and use people’s names. He has been there a month even if he doesn’t call them by their real names why new man? What about moony or yellow eyes or something less easily confused with my man and other man and... I know he’s 5 but children that age can use Nouns. Some of them the bits you put in to show child POV makes me think your harry is stupid not smart.
There’s little point saying this when it’s a complete story already but just so you know.
That’s my only criticism... love the rest.

A very cute and heart warming story. I loved the parts with the kittens and the swing.

Thanks for writing the story .

¿Por quéeee? If you write like that, I get confused

This was very well written and I find the way you write Harry interesting. Loved the story.

I love it. Absolutely love it.. it was outstanding!

Hola saludos , espero que continues la historia , con la segunda parte me gusto muchooo , pero me hubiera gustado que ( Vernon debio haber sufrido en la carcel por los demas reos , maldito pedofilo )