Reviews for Temporary Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was a great story! I really enjoyed reading it. Your Harry is just adorable. Poor little guy had it rough. I really wonder what house he'll be in. And who he'll end up with in the end. It's definitely something to think about. I wish there was more! :) -Yvonne |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story quite a bit. |
![]() ![]() This is so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's the most amazingly sweet loving story I have ever read! I absolutely adored it. I hope you did get to many harsh critics for your use of "toddler language." I actually really enjoyed those sections. It brought more life and reality to the story, if you know what I mean! It was truly an inspired piece of art. This is my favorite family story! Thanks for sharing! ~Jane~ |
![]() ![]() I read thia story manyyears ago and for the life of me couldnt fimd it again. Im really happy I finally found it. I love it |
![]() ![]() i know a lot of people might not like the grammar thing with Harry, but i think its actually really cool. you are really good at still making the story super good even with using the grammar. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way that you wrote Harry's perspective. I'll have to check your profile to see if you're still writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! Loved it very much! |
![]() ![]() You changed Portia's fiance's name from John to Ian in this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was sweet. Harry is a little heart breaker sorry to see that this was the last you erote since 2014 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful! I almost cried when I realized it had finished! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that made me cry so much. the ending was just beautiful |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so amazing. I loved it . it was different but it was wonderful. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the ending and it was a good idea to leave the hogwart years out. The focus was on Harry childhood recovery and family. I like everyone in his family and the bonds each character has. Overall I love it! Write on! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story! |