Reviews for Temporary Home
Ameranthian chapter 30 . 3/29/2016
Aw, this is such a good, satisfying end to a bitter-sweet story. I love it, and would love to see a second work for when Harry is in school. Thanks for posting this here.
Ameranthian chapter 1 . 3/29/2016
Aw, poor Harry. He had is rough. Hope he gets some relief from Severus. Thanks for this first chapter. I can hardly wait to read the rest!
RenTenTen chapter 23 . 3/8/2016
Every time Harry says he loves someone, I cry.
Chase'sGirl19 chapter 30 . 1/23/2016
Why did it have to end!:,(
Chase'sGirl19 chapter 7 . 1/22/2016
I love your idea of Harry's grammar!
and Moony!D
Chase'sGirl19 chapter 2 . 1/22/2016
lol and I was about to leave a comment about the grammar, but I realized what you were trying to do haha... loving your story so far )
lizzyaml chapter 30 . 1/19/2016
omg I so loved it and the end was fabulous ;) the good conclusion
lilly-flower15 chapter 1 . 12/18/2015
Liked chapter
Slytherin Princess34 chapter 30 . 11/21/2015
AWWWW Please make a sequel!
BoleynGirl chapter 3 . 10/24/2015
I just found this and it is love at first site:-) I can't wait to see where this is going.
adafrog chapter 30 . 10/23/2015
Lovely, thanks.
Fenris Jin chapter 4 . 10/8/2015
Maybe Severus should have explained better that Carrot isn't going to Kitty Heaven. xD
Fenris Jin chapter 3 . 10/8/2015
The broken grammar really is killing me some brain cells. See? XD

Sorry for mentioning it again. It really is not necessary for Harry to be narrated in such a way. I really hope Harry can get better soon. I might not make it until the end of the story if it goes on any longer. XD

I'd like to see things from Harry's perspective, but the broken narrative really is getting on me. Thank Merlin the narration followed Severus, it will have to tide me over for next chapters. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 2 . 10/8/2015
I'm not sure the broken grammar was needed. I could understand the need for it to show Harry's mental state.. Unfortunately, all it gave me was a headache. xD

Perhaps Harry can make internal dialogue with broken grammar instead of the narration. It really was hard to read.. and Wobbi is giving me a headache too. XD
Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 10/8/2015
For a mute.. Harry is adorable.. It must be a kid thing. xD

This sounds like a promising read. :)
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