Aw, this is such a good, satisfying end to a bitter-sweet story. I love it, and would love to see a second work for when Harry is in school. Thanks for posting this here.

Aw, poor Harry. He had is rough. Hope he gets some relief from Severus. Thanks for this first chapter. I can hardly wait to read the rest!

Every time Harry says he loves someone, I cry.

Why did it have to end!:,(

I love your idea of Harry's grammar!
and Moony!D

lol and I was about to leave a comment about the grammar, but I realized what you were trying to do haha... loving your story so far )

omg I so loved it and the end was fabulous ;) the good conclusion

Liked chapter

AWWWW Please make a sequel!

I just found this and it is love at first site:-) I can't wait to see where this is going.

Lovely, thanks.

Maybe Severus should have explained better that Carrot isn't going to Kitty Heaven. xD

The broken grammar really is killing me some brain cells. See? XD

Sorry for mentioning it again. It really is not necessary for Harry to be narrated in such a way. I really hope Harry can get better soon. I might not make it until the end of the story if it goes on any longer. XD

I'd like to see things from Harry's perspective, but the broken narrative really is getting on me. Thank Merlin the narration followed Severus, it will have to tide me over for next chapters. XD

I'm not sure the broken grammar was needed. I could understand the need for it to show Harry's mental state.. Unfortunately, all it gave me was a headache. xD

Perhaps Harry can make internal dialogue with broken grammar instead of the narration. It really was hard to read.. and Wobbi is giving me a headache too. XD

For a mute.. Harry is adorable.. It must be a kid thing. xD

This sounds like a promising read. :)