Reviews for Temporary Home
Mike.Delphi chapter 22 . 8/26/2015
If you write Sirius anything like Canon, THIS can only end in a gunshot.
Mike.Delphi chapter 7 . 8/26/2015
Traumatized children are often stunted in speech and sometimes, theoretically, thought patterns. I see where you are going with this. I take it you've had... Doubters?
Calmzone1 chapter 30 . 8/8/2015
Well done, tough writing with the simplistic language you have Harry using.
A.A.wasker chapter 30 . 8/6/2015
I loved the idea of him in a couple of years but I hated not showing me how sev and Remus developed there love feelings ** but I wish it was longer and sadly you didn't give severus justice
A.A.wasker chapter 29 . 8/6/2015
Harry's birthday again
A.A.wasker chapter 28 . 8/6/2015
I liked the smart way of making him call them uncle but in Italian ( laughs) you really gave your thought into it a d that's amazing I love it when people like you are devoted to the story like that , and god how I felt to angry from these scumbags ...ah I wanna kill them and torture them ...
A.A.wasker chapter 27 . 8/6/2015
okay head went far but okay ...are they meeting his aunt and uncle ?! These horrid people ( screams angry ) I wish they are dead !
A.A.wasker chapter 26 . 8/6/2015
Awww no Luna's mom is dying ( crys ) please don't break the cute happy Harry and Luna
...and why do I feel there is a catch about sev and Remus going to have a day off ? Could it be !( gasp )
A.A.wasker chapter 25 . 8/6/2015
Its amazing that up you picked white snake for sev cause they are signs of good luck and health in Japan believes , and again ( laugh ) with his men thats so wrong and funny
A.A.wasker chapter 24 . 8/6/2015
I wish you do a sequel , but your right it is healing more life style but as I said I wish you focus on his relationship with sev
A.A.wasker chapter 23 . 8/6/2015
That was really funny Sirus acted like a big baby ...
Even when they explained Harry's situation ...and it's cute he is making more friends
A.A.wasker chapter 22 . 8/6/2015
I do agree with your idea ...Sirus is important but I do agree we don't want him to over take the story , and I really liked the funny joke of Harry's cook book to sev but I don't like
A.A.wasker chapter 21 . 8/6/2015
I wish I had a good listener friend ( sighs ) ...cause all my friends give me not wrong gifts ! No worse ...things I hate and they know I hate them...and did sev figured it out ?!
A.A.wasker chapter 19 . 8/6/2015
That's amazing the wolf accident between Harry and remey was amazing ! But I wish a moment to bond Harry to sev more
A.A.wasker chapter 18 . 8/6/2015
Awww sick Harry is cute ! And to say the truth I never had pox in my life and I'm 23 it that bad ?!
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