Reviews for Temporary Home |
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![]() ![]() ![]() His first word ! ( runs all Round the room ) Harry said his first word ! And was laughing ! ...sorry I was so happy for Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Harry ! Poor Severus ! These chapter broke my heart ...but so far I'm loving the story more and more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg ! A cliffhanger ...please Harry be safe ...and that's cute bring more of Charlie |
![]() ![]() ![]() ( laughs hard falling to the ground ) sorry but it was so funny reading the conflict in Harry's little mind comparing "uncle " is bad but saying " his man " is better ...( laughs more ) this word is even worse ...I'm so excited to see more Harry and sev parts |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really am liking your story ...but why is the chapters are short ?! And more sev and Harry moments |
![]() ![]() ![]() From where did you get the name for Firenze's father ?Its creative and that was a mean thing from argus to do to little Harry ...can't wait to read the rest |
![]() ![]() ![]() Omg that's so cute , how Harry... Got to view the school in his own way , come to think of it ...he is the first kid not to like the school But I wish he interact more with Severus |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was so cute I'm glad you wrote this part but what is Severus 's birthday gift to Harry ?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think too that Remus eyes are like cats ( blushes ) and I love wolfs a lot ...and it was an amazing idea how Harry showed them the name ...sprinkles is soooo cute ... I had a cat I called it ( fufuf) as its similar to ( fluffy ) she is so furry |
![]() ![]() ![]() I Liked the way remus treated Harry and the unexplained connection between them but I wish that Severus was more a ware of Harry's feelings and actions |
![]() ![]() ![]() (laughs) that's really funny but I can't wait to see how will the shopping go ...but it seems you have trouble with the Harry grammar ..I mean that a lot of people annoying you about that ...and what kind of plot you ask ?! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's just sooooo cute and I can't wait to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's so cute ...how the twins and Charlie talk to him and get what a rubber duck is for ( laughs hard ) and ( YaYyy) Portia is back and that's nice of sev to ask about Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow ...poor Arthur ( laughs ) I bet this surprised him , and poor Harry he didn't get that carrot is not dead and sev please try harder ( cheers ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It broke me when I read how Harry did the chores scared ( awww) and cute carrot... Sev why take the kitty ! Please bring new one for little Harry |