Reviews for The First Page
sdphantom10 chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
The dialogue is engaging and fun to read, and you make the setting sound so ripe! Love it All!
MilleniaMaster chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
I haven't reviewed a super smash bros story before, so here it goes.

I'm afraid you were a little off with Lyn's character. She IS kind, but not as optimistic as you make her appear. Shes stouthearted, which I think you could have expressed a little more. I happen to be writing a story about FE7, and I worry about how I keep the characters within their personalities as well.

Link's character was very good, though. There's only a few stories where he remains as the 'silent hero.' Personally I don't like it, but it's good to see him talk in stories. (I haven't read a lot of LOZ stories, so that's why I'm saying that. But in any other case, good work. I hope to see more from this.