Reviews for Naruto x Tsunade: To Cross boundaries
dashawn chapter 1 . 12/13/2014
u should do one of campione x bleach
coolstorybruh chapter 30 . 10/17/2014
If only the story was longer
Guest chapter 31 . 10/4/2014
It was good but you could stick more to the true story and I was really getting confused with the ages was naruto akid or teen during the first couple of chapters and try to add more details
Disturbedhrt chapter 16 . 9/9/2014
Good story but all the Kun's and chan's are taking the fun from the story also the age difference is making it hard to read maybe a age jutsu where tsunade is actually turned back to a teenager would be better
shadowzeon91 chapter 31 . 9/6/2014
It is very good and I have enjoyed the story
PugTheMagician chapter 31 . 8/29/2014
hmm, not much i can really say about this story. the beginning was bad. i'm sorry but thats how i feel about it. then again just like Hektols story it got much better as you went along. towards the end it seemed like the writing style of Demons of Konoha in that it had the same general style of an over powered hero. i like what you did with sakura as it showed the dangers of obsession. her powers were pretty cool too and i actually believed that sasuke would die against him. i guess though seeing as how sasuke has affinities in both fire and lightning, the only elements that give off a light when used, he was pretty much the worst opponent for her to fight. the sharingan didn't exactly help either. the romance between tsunade and naruto was done fairly well. the beginning was a bit lack luster but i like that rather than have them immediately get together you highlighted the particular problems they would have in a relationship because of societal views. i like that you had both of them solve it in there own ways. i like that rather than simply have naruto grow older, you showed the dangers of such a jutsu in the continuous destruction and recreation of his bones and organs. i am a bit surprised that you chose iwa to be there refuge. i personally would have chosen kumo. they have always wanted to get there hands on a hyuuga and having one willingly become a citizen of them would definitely make them happy. there is also the fact that they seem to treat their jinchuriki better than the other villages and they seem to just love collecting jutsu so having members of all of konohas major clans join would be a major boon to them. however i am glad that you didn't do that, onoki seems pretty cool to me, at least the one you portrayed. it also made it so that it was shown that it is not easy getting citizenship in your enemies country/village. the introduction of hina as a love interest for naruto was also nice. i do wonder, at one point naruto said that because of the kyuubi he is imortal, yet kairi said that she had yet to teach han the training to become a hanyou so he could be immortal with him, so my question is, is he already a hanyou? just a minor plot hole. lets see, what else. nothing much left to say other than i liked the fight scenes. seeing as how this story was published and last updated around the same time as your naruten story and i didn't really like the starting of that one either, maybe i'll give it a shot again, maybe it will get better. i hope so. i apologize if this seems like a flame to you. its more that i started out reading your latest works before your earlier ones and the difference experience has made has been made clear. i enjoyed the story despite my criticisms so thank you
Guest chapter 31 . 7/21/2014
Good story
Guest chapter 31 . 7/5/2014
Great story, you could really see how you improved as a writer during the course it took.
Guest chapter 9 . 7/4/2014
Golden Fox-sama? Really? He must be daaaaamn good in the sack.
Guest chapter 7 . 7/4/2014
Despite the fast pace, I still cried reading this chapter. Although not as refined as your later works of literature - it does show that you've always had a good grasp on what make the hart-strings twang.
Rebellious Uzumaki chapter 31 . 6/28/2014
Awesome story man but u seriously need to update the contract of the shinigami, you just can't leave people hanging man.
Guest chapter 31 . 6/11/2014
Can you do a lemon for hina please
Guest chapter 31 . 5/7/2014
The best ever read
Renton163 chapter 4 . 5/2/2014
I love nearly all your stories but I just can't continue this one I am sorry but please keep writing more because your are still my favorite author
Guest chapter 31 . 4/22/2014
Absolutly awsome fanfic you did an good job and i like the naruto tsunade couple so cute thank you for this story
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