Reviews for Farewell Forever Diary
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18
I have to do a project like this at school too. This really helped. Thank you!
anon chapter 1 . 3/17/2014
This was amazing 3 Do you think you could write one for callum too ?
God3ssOfCats chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
Ah, this was really good! I love it when people write about Lynette and this was amazing
Valenteen chapter 1 . 3/26/2012
Wildcharahchild, I think that this final entry of a diary is really good. Q: Please could you do another story, perhaps Lynette's entire diary entry up to that one? Just a thought.
LyricsArePoetry chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
Oh. My. Gosh. Hardly anyone writes about Lynette and I hate that but I'm so glad you wrote this. It's amazing, so powerful, so emotive. Brilliant!
LittleCandyMan chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
Other than one or two typos in the beginning, I didn't see anything wrong with it. It had great writing and was quite trajic like Romeo and Juliet where she wants to die because it is the only way for her to be with Jed. There is a great range of emotions and the first person is a great way of making the reader feel everything happening. Maybe if you explain the feelings the main character is going through at a deeper level like seeing Jed punched over and over made her sick ot the stomach. Or something like that.