|Reviews for Stolen Secrets and Shattered Dreams|
| heartstrings13 chapter 25 . 10/8
| L Christine chapter 25 . 10/1
Hi. I found your story awhile ago (long after you finished it lol) so I wasn’t going to review it but I really liked it (and admittedly have re-read it more than once) so I decided I wanted to take a chance and try to let you know just how much I did enjoy it. Aside from the naughty bits (which, let’s cut the crap, were highly enjoyable all the way through the story-from the first bar-gasm to the big reveal of Gonzo to the re-enactment of Bella’s vampire porn lmao) but the story was so much more than that.
I am a child of the ‘80s myself so I absolutely loved all of the references to all of the old TV shows (although admittedly there were some that even I didn’t recognize or remember) but still...something about the nostalgia angle just got me, and it was nice to have a playful background when so much of the story line was so very traumatic and intense. I won’t even pretend that Edward treating Bella the way he did when he “broke up” with her didn’t tear my heart out and then all of the subsequent events that happened with Michael just made things that much more difficult to bear, but when Edward *FINALLY* pulled his head out of his ass and went to the home to make things right...that was a moment of sheer joy for me. I think I yelled and cried all at the same time lol.
Everything that followed that, all of the positive happenings anyway, were so inspiring. To see both of them finally able to embrace the person that they each were and “JUST BE” in their own skin...how many of us struggle with that and sometimes never even achieve it? I know it’s something I’m still working on and I’m...well, older than Edward was in the story, shall we say lol.
All in all this was a story I thoroughly enjoyed and it’s clear you obviously have a great talent for writing. I will definitely be checking your page for any other Twilight stories you may have.
| Gabstastic chapter 22 . 9/21
Im from margarita Island! You Dom y know how happy (and incredibly homesick) i am that you Chose my hometown for Your story. Now im in tears because reaaally close to manzanillo beach, there’s a place called Zaragoza beach... this is my favorite place eveeerrr! Thank you so much for making me remember...
| audyaurelie chapter 24 . 8/12
beautiful. they’ve come so far
| audyaurelie chapter 8 . 8/7
literally fuck off edward.. you FUCKED THIS UP REALLY REALLY BAD. If I was Bella i’d never forgive him tbh
| Twinerd1 chapter 25 . 7/17
In all honesty, this is the first story that has made me cry in public, laugh at the most inappropriate time and just make me smile in along time so thank you
| stained17 chapter 25 . 6/6
Oh my goodness, this is fabulous! I’m so glad I stumbled upon it and read it! Thanks for writing and sharing it!
| Lillywhite1 chapter 25 . 6/5
Thanks for writing this wonderful story!
| Zellideth76 chapter 1 . 4/5
Hi, I'm Mexican and fanfiction reader. I read your story (many really) through the traditions that you allow to Ale Pattz, I want to thank you for writing so incredible and congratulate you for it. I hope to read more about you soon.
your stories are worthwhile and could well be books for new generations.
Thank you again and congratulations!
| LadyEchoLynn chapter 1 . 3/30
Chap 16... omg! Lol way to lighten the mood for everyone. Except Edward of course lol
| Bevey99 chapter 25 . 3/26
I read this when it was WIP. So good then, so good now. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.
| shannon30033 chapter 1 . 2/5
Thanks! I loved this story! It was full of angst, drama and family stuff...just good all around.
| shannon30033 chapter 1 . 2/4
Your right. I have never read a lemon quite like that one before. It was crazy. Crazy hot. Fuckin crazy hot.
| Guest chapter 4 . 12/27/2017
im in distress lmao
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/27/2017
dude this first chapter already got me