Reviews for Paternal Evolution
00-night-eyes-00 chapter 1 . 3/7
love it looking forward to more
jenifaui chapter 1 . 2/4
Loved your story. Dean's loyal, protective traits make him a heartwarming father. Thanks for the good read!
maipigen chapter 1 . 1/12
How do you always manage to write these epic one shots that make me wanna tear my hear out when they end because theyre so full of possiblities for more? I'd loooove to see Sam's reaction and more on the whole first season with Ben in it...PLEASE! I'll beg and whine until i hear from you:D
Anyway, this is probably my favorite of yours, i loved it!
intensewhatever chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
THIS WAS AMAZING! I want more! :)
PrincessLazyPants chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
I am in love with this story and I can't wait to read the sequel! :)
Anne Sullivan chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
You so should continue this...It's great!
CommChatter chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
An interesting what if? scenario And a good story.
Slinky-and-the-BloodyWands chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
This was great! So interesting to see Dean with such a tiny Ben, and I love how you set up their new life. I'll have to go read the sequel now.
lazor chapter 1 . 4/21/2013
wow. i love this. a very interesting what could have been. i love how quickly dean took to his new and scary role as a dad. bobby, ben, and dean were the best family ever. you even had me feeling for john a bit and i'm really not a fan of his. this was wonderful. i love that dean recognized the very handy things he could do and made a life out of it and i love that ash was his buddy and helped him out. great story. i feel bad for whatever is to come.
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
This is absolutely fantastic. Your writing style is fantastic and flowed really well and covered all of the events with just the right touch to really give us a feeling of how things went down. Your characterization was spot-on, even though you did explore some places these guys never got to go in the show. I loved it. It played out exactly like I imagine it would have happened if Dean had found out about Ben earlier. It is so awesome. Once I started, I could not stop reading. And there were such great lines here too. I think one of my favorites was: "The last kid he had helped raise went to fucking Stanford on a full ride scholarship, thank you very much." XD
Neumzie chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
omg tell me you wrote that meeting! i love canon rewrites as long as theyre well written AND THIS IS!
PhantomDragon12 chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
This story is gold. Any chance you're going to write more in this verse?
Harm Marie chapter 1 . 8/21/2012
Liked this.
TA Salmalin chapter 1 . 7/17/2012
That was a fantastic story. Dean is such a wonderful father. I only wish that we could have seen a little bit of Sam, because I was so mad and upset on Dean's behalf when Sam once again refused to talk to him, even if Sam couldn't've known what a pivotal moment this was in Dean's life. But I can understand why you chose to end it there.
Katja chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
I love dean is be a father. A great plus is, living at Bobbys.
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