Reviews for Tale of a Football Star and Wizard
Dragonman109 chapter 2 . 6/8
Update when you can please.
Guest chapter 2 . 7/26/2017
Are you going to finish this?
Guest chapter 2 . 7/13/2017
Not that the story is bad it's pretty good actually but what in the hell does this have to do with Harry Potter in any shape of the form
SortingHat chapter 2 . 5/2/2017
The cruel joke was not updating the story. Poor Evan.
AshesGleamandGlow chapter 2 . 2/10/2017
I really like this story, can't wait to see where it goes! The Younger Half of AshesGleamandGlow
Just Sandy chapter 2 . 10/13/2016
This story is pretty good. Plenty of potential. Though there were some confusion going on about the timeline but otherwise it is pretty good. At first I was wondering when Harry was going to come into the story, but mid way I was like 'ohhhh Evan Parker IS Harry Potter!' Though it sucks that it has been about 5 yrs since its been updated...
dannie12 chapter 2 . 8/3/2016
Update! :(
Firestar Prime chapter 2 . 2/21/2016
Western-Otaku chapter 2 . 10/7/2015
Time doesn't seem to stay consistent in this chapter...

Chapter Name implies it's been 4 years since the Prologue.

Chapter Title says it's been 5 years since the Prologue.

At the beginning of the chapter, Evan is 22 years old.

Closer to the end, he ends up being 20 years old.

One of the cups is dated for an event held from 1998 to something 89? (May have meant to put 1998-99?)

So... is Evan 22 or 20? If he is 22, then that means that somewhere between 5-6 years has to have passed in order for Evan to get from being 16 to 22. If he is 20, then 4 years seems to be the right amount of time.

All that aside, this fic had some potential but I'm a bit sad that this hasn't been updated in 4 years...
Guest chapter 1 . 7/26/2015
Please update. This story has tons of potential
mmk997 chapter 2 . 5/2/2015
I was wondering if you can please update this story
aishiteru naru chapter 2 . 12/2/2014
please update
panther73110 chapter 2 . 8/30/2014
This is a great story and I hope you finish it someday
Guest chapter 2 . 5/27/2014
Where did Harry potter get involved?
TwoWayMirror chapter 2 . 5/26/2014
This story had an amazing start! I just wish it was being continued. So many possibilities... Do you know if someone continued it? Or maybe there's a similar story out there? I really love the idea but I'm not much of a writer sadly. I could never do it justice.
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