|Reviews for Original Sin|
| Guest chapter 8 . 3/25
Hi I just finished reading original sin someone recommended on Facebook it was awesome story really really liked , thank you I loved Bella and Carlisle I don't see a lot of stories for different pairing so this one made my day thank you
| Carlisle Uncovered Contest chapter 1 . 3/22
Original Sin was chosen as the "Weekend Ficspiration" story in the Carlisle, Uncovered Contest FB group. Thanks for giving us such a wonderful CxB story!
| Powered by 23 Kicks chapter 27 . 3/19
I finished this story late last night and decided to let it all sink in before offering my comments, because I went on a roller coaster ride with these characters.
I swung back and forth while reading about whether or not Carlisle did the right thing by leaving. A lot of the time, until I learned more about why he was such a clam, I thought he was cold and unfeeling. But then he'd do something that showed he wasn't that way, so yeah. Back and forth, up and down. By the time I learned about Edward, I wanted Bella to kick Carlisle in the shin and run for her life.
And then when I learned about what he DID, I thought leaving was stupid and how could he just LEAVE? There's help to be found, etc. God, I felt so sorry for Esme. That's probably the point that I disliked Carlisle the most. He did an awful, awful thing, and then he he did another awful thing.
I guess 20-some years of self-imposed punishment earned him a Bella, although why she had to be punished, I'll never know, lol. Poor girl.
I liked this story, and then I didn't like it. I usually like a tormented character who slowly comes to life when he/she finds love, but something about Carlisle me from falling in love with him. I was glad he found happiness in the end, though.
Thanks for sharing this! You're a wonderful writer.
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/18
Loving this. I like how you treated Bella's relationship with Mike. It felt real, not like a detail that's just skimmed over to get the heroine closer to the hero.
I'm not usually a Carlisle/Bella reader, but this is excellent writing with a sweet Carlisle. I'm on board.
Here via Rachel Winterhorses rec and the Carlisle Uncovered contest.
| kalibean chapter 29 . 3/6
Excellent story...loved the original plot and your storytelling. Great depth of characters too. I honestly couldn't put it down until it was finished.
| PAT2024 chapter 29 . 2/1
Nice to have a bit of Carlisle's perspective. Thanks... I would love some more outtakes if one day you feel like it... I'm not ready to let them go yet. Thanks for sharing
| PAT2024 chapter 28 . 2/1
| PAT2024 chapter 27 . 2/1
Whaou ! This is really one of the best AH story ever. I loved it, even if I usually am not a fan of Carlisle /Bella together, In this story it worked so well. I Loved how all the characters where depicted and the story line was just perfect and original. Thank you for sharing. Please don't stop writing you are truly talented.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 29 . 1/22
I loved this story. Very nicely done!
Thank you for sharing with us.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 28 . 1/22
Well, that certainly explains a LOT about Betty...
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 27 . 1/21
It's a shame he doesn't realize the extent
of the grace poured into his life. That he
do any seem to acknowledge the fact that
he has been MADE worthy!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 26 . 1/21
Wow! I wasn't expecting that yet!
I actually have hope now that they
may one day have a child together!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 25 . 1/21
That was very big of Charlie e.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 24 . 1/21
So glad Edward is relaxing in his father's
acceptance. Maybe they will learn some
balance as a family.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 23 . 1/21
He's a petulant child, but how could she resist him?