Reviews for Original Sin
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 16 . 1/21
Why does he believe himself irredeemable?!
Was he the result of infidelity? Was he told
by his 'father' that it was HIS fault his mom
was treated like shit?
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 15 . 1/21
Who is this patron saint he has deemed necessary?
What is she the patron of?
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 14 . 1/21
Who is Esme to him? Daughter? Sister?
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 13 . 1/21
What is his issue with oral sex?!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 12 . 1/21
I can't wait to find out who Rachel's baby-daddy is!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 11 . 1/21
I am absolutely itching to get some perspective!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 10 . 1/21
Let me guess...Carlisle's parents were religious
zealots who didn't live the life they touted, and
we're cold and restrictive?
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 9 . 1/21
Poor Jacob...fled his apartment to get away from
his bio-sister getting fucked, only to stumble into
his sister-from-another-mister's tryst! LMAO
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 8 . 1/21
He has a whole treasure trove to open,
not just a box, like Pandora! Wow.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 7 . 1/21
No, an earthquake wouldn't be so bad with a
man like that accompanying the tremors. ..
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 6 . 1/21
I love how they've now been on several unplanned
dates...and she knows his aversion to children, and
yet, they're just NOW exchanging numbers. Very
UN-cliche and they just seem to be getting started!
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 5 . 1/21
That would be a very interesting and intimate
way to get to know a new best friend! LOL
My only fear is that Rosalie will fall for Bella.
That could be a painful scenario.
That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 4 . 1/21
Wow. Carlisle has a serious case of
self-loathing going on! He studies all
of those religions, hasn't he stumbled
onto the idea of Grace?! LOL
orchidluv chapter 25 . 11/2/2016
I didn't expect the Charlie twist. Brilliant!
orchidluv chapter 6 . 11/2/2016
Man I don't usually read AH stories but you've pulled me in, literally sucked me straight into the storyline and I cannot make myself go find some vamps! I applaud your writing prowess my dear.
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