|Reviews for Original Sin|
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 16 . 1/21
Why does he believe himself irredeemable?!
Was he the result of infidelity? Was he told
by his 'father' that it was HIS fault his mom
was treated like shit?
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 15 . 1/21
Who is this patron saint he has deemed necessary?
What is she the patron of?
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 14 . 1/21
Who is Esme to him? Daughter? Sister?
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 13 . 1/21
What is his issue with oral sex?!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 12 . 1/21
I can't wait to find out who Rachel's baby-daddy is!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 11 . 1/21
I am absolutely itching to get some perspective!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 10 . 1/21
Let me guess...Carlisle's parents were religious
zealots who didn't live the life they touted, and
we're cold and restrictive?
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 9 . 1/21
Poor Jacob...fled his apartment to get away from
his bio-sister getting fucked, only to stumble into
his sister-from-another-mister's tryst! LMAO
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 8 . 1/21
He has a whole treasure trove to open,
not just a box, like Pandora! Wow.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 7 . 1/21
No, an earthquake wouldn't be so bad with a
man like that accompanying the tremors. ..
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 6 . 1/21
I love how they've now been on several unplanned
dates...and she knows his aversion to children, and
yet, they're just NOW exchanging numbers. Very
UN-cliche and they just seem to be getting started!
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 5 . 1/21
That would be a very interesting and intimate
way to get to know a new best friend! LOL
My only fear is that Rosalie will fall for Bella.
That could be a painful scenario.
| That'sMzPeachesTYVM chapter 4 . 1/21
Wow. Carlisle has a serious case of
self-loathing going on! He studies all
of those religions, hasn't he stumbled
onto the idea of Grace?! LOL
| orchidluv chapter 25 . 11/2/2016
I didn't expect the Charlie twist. Brilliant!
| orchidluv chapter 6 . 11/2/2016
Man I don't usually read AH stories but you've pulled me in, literally sucked me straight into the storyline and I cannot make myself go find some vamps! I applaud your writing prowess my dear.