Reviews for Original Sin
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 28 . 8/4/2013
ooh eer, Berty and Carlisle, no not for me. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 27 . 8/4/2013
Perfect. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 25 . 8/4/2013
Wow, that was a good chapter. Hmm Billy and Charlie, what a fab idea. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 24 . 8/4/2013
Yup definitely a good thing. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 22 . 8/4/2013
Time out time out time out is what he needs. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 21 . 8/4/2013
Well you really cannot blame Edward, he is just pushing to see where the limits are. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 20 . 8/4/2013
Wow, Carlisle has been incredibly hard on himself hasn't he. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 19 . 8/4/2013
Phew I had a horrible thought you were going to bring Carlisle in there at the end to really round things up! xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 18 . 8/4/2013
See she should have had that conversation last night. sigh xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 17 . 8/4/2013
Oh god. Well actually I am pretty sure that eventually it will all work out. Bella and Edward will get on, and Carlisle will finally get to meet his son, and change his idea on kids, because this has an HEA right? xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 15 . 8/4/2013
See nothing bad about Esme. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 14 . 8/2/2013
so sister, aunt? xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 12 . 8/2/2013
sex on the sofa with hot glasses, phew xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 11 . 8/2/2013
oh he is behaving odd isn't he. i am glad that Bella noticed the day. xx
Jasper-replaces-edward chapter 9 . 8/2/2013
bit worried he is always touching her throat but hopefully it's not a wierd thing. xx
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