Reviews for Adventure Time with Marshall and Gumball |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I remembered this fic randomly this year an had to dig to find it again only to realize it was written 10 years ago. 10 YEARS! I cant believe this still holds up after so long. I remember reading this over an over again an now reading it again after a decade I still wish there was a sequel lol thank you for this 10 years later. It literally still impacted me a decade later an I really appreciate that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the best Adventure Time fanfiction to ever exist. The fact that this is such a lengthy multi-chaptered story just makes it more amazing. Thank you for sharing such a lovely story with us! I enjoyed it so much I had to read it twice, haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Meant to leave this when I finished, but I think it's pretty amazing how close you got to Marshall's real back story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I guess that's it then. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I WANT CANDY! THAT WAS AWESOME! I knew I knew it as soon as the lyrics came up, but then I was like, "this is really happening" Super clever and cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've typed Marshall's line into a Morse code translator twice now, and all I got was "tk rants are TN fire net tse taritca ruddinn" |
![]() ![]() I'm really disappointed that the morass code didn't say anything |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Ice Queen is literally likewhy you gotta me so mean? don't you know I'm the Ice Queen? why you gotta be so mean? I'm gonna marry you anyway." |
![]() ![]() ![]() I read this all in one day and I have no regrets. The only thing is that I wish that there was an epilogue. Other than that it was amazing. |
![]() ![]() Woooow, this is such a good story! Would you let me read it on Youtube? Email me at |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story, I enjoyed the plot line and how you portrayed each character. I thought the last chapter was a little abrupt but when I got to the end it all kind of worked, you know? You're a great writer, this is a really great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this fic and i especially love this chapter, but a few things to consider? for one, i get that gumball is made of gum and all, but no asshole, gummy or not, should be able to take anything- whether it's a finger or an entire dick -without any lubrication whatsoever. just sayin' ya coulda at least used spit because going in dry would be really fucking painful. also, this is more a pet-peeve than anything, but do you have a beta reader? because there are just a few grammatical and spelling errors. aside from that, though, amazing story! |
![]() ![]() GCYFXHGVHGUIFYIVBJNKNJIVTFSRFBNJKOLPMNHU*CFY FU9REACBDS0HVFYUFDU I CANT I CANT ITS SO CUTE YET SO SAD THIS IS NOT FAR |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Schwabl all she wanted to do was to join in on the cuddle |
![]() ![]() ![]() I normally wait till the last chapter to review. But I just had to say that you pun game is ON POINT. What a COOL chapter. ... Don't worry, I'll see myself out haha. Anyway, great chapter! I will be reading on. :) |