Reviews for Unnoticed Beginnings
StarsUponTheBarricades chapter 6 . 9/22/2011
Aaaawwwww! So wait... They didn't have sex but he sexually undressed her and put her to bed? :P I don't know my brain is cabbaged! ;) loved it!
StarsUponTheBarricades chapter 5 . 9/22/2011
As if Sara would be comfortable with Greg undressing her... And she got mad for him looking! :P ahaha but I feel some nice stuff coming! I'll say that but ya know! :P loved it!
Longing for Oblivion chapter 6 . 9/22/2011
Another great chapter!
charlibubble chapter 6 . 9/22/2011
OOOOOO loved it :D

and you credited me, I thought we were keeping it a secret ;0) lol
Longing for Oblivion chapter 5 . 9/22/2011
Loved the two new chapters!
charlibubble chapter 5 . 9/22/2011
HA! he's a nice guy deep down lol this will torment her tomorrow... ;0)
StarsUponTheBarricades chapter 4 . 9/22/2011
Wow... Greg is really trying to get her to admit she's Jealous... :D I really wonder what's going to happen in this story! :P loved it! xx
charlibubble chapter 4 . 9/22/2011
oooooooo Greg, you are a naughty boy aren't you lol he knows exactly what he's doing, he likes being in control. simply cannot wait for more of this lol
charlibubble chapter 3 . 9/21/2011
I KNEW it was Amy :D:D loved it, I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, I have a number of possibilities running through my head ... xx
StarsUponTheBarricades chapter 3 . 9/21/2011
Why did I think they were together? WHY? D; ahhhh maybe not but anywho Sara is Jealous!
Longing for Oblivion chapter 3 . 9/21/2011
MORE PLEASE! I really loved this chapter!
StarsUponTheBarricades chapter 2 . 9/21/2011
Awwww yay they finally got together! :D it would be amazing in the next chapter for like a flashback or something! :D Hope you are doing well in your new house! :D and i loved it! :D xxx
CSIknowItall chapter 2 . 9/20/2011
While reading this I looked up and saw greg on the tv screen. And then I flipped him off. Good story though. It's kinda hard for a GSR girl lol!
Longing for Oblivion chapter 2 . 9/20/2011
I certainly liked this chapter. Can't wait to read more!
charlibubble chapter 2 . 9/20/2011
ooooo this was great! I have a sneaking suspicion that's not Sara he's manipulating at the end. :D more soon please :D xxx
33 | « Prev Page 1 2 3 Next »