|Reviews for The Rise of Kate Beckett|
| iloveboness chapter 1 . 7/14/2012
Great chapter :)))
| swancatic chapter 1 . 11/28/2011
Hey Twin xD This is JJStanatic :P
Lol but on here I'm ! :P
Quick warning I tend to babble a lot in reviews O.o
Anyways, I really like this story and found the way it was writting really good! :P I have to admit we all hoped it'd turn out like that...
Sadly Kate decided to hide what she trully heard! :P
Hey, quick question, Have you checked out my FF?
Okee byebye xx
| midnightread chapter 1 . 11/18/2011
It was good and I hope you passed your Journalism class.
Although I like your version I'm sorry to say that I like the episode version more, mainly because Kate remembers everything and won't tell anyone.
| samantha mcpoland chapter 1 . 11/15/2011
in all honestly sam they should have done this in the show lolz and yes this is me sam m lol and this my tenth time reading it
| ifyougetedwardigetemmett chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
I actually wasn't able to read this because of the way it was spaced.
When a different person speaks, traditionally one would used a separate paragraph. I found it difficult to follow along the first lines, because I was always confused about who was talking.
Every now and then, if you want to keep dialogue between two people in the same paragraph, try to signal who is speakin gbefore the quote itself.
Ex: 'Josh?' Castle said aloud, before Lanie cut in, saying "..."
Otherwise, it becomes difficult to keep track of who is talking.
| CasckettInWhoville chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
It was really good but it went by too quickly