|Reviews for Asteria Nightmare|
| ebonypol chapter 20 . 2/12
Truly amazing! This sounds like straight out of the manga! Thanks for read. Truly amazing :D
| dogluvva99 chapter 11 . 1/20
Just looking through their dreams I'm like huh, Luffy's not carrying his dream, he's carrying his entire crew's. and vice versa. But, Luffy has a really big burden. This gives me the tinglys. It really brings out my emotions and I'm thinking along with the character's. you are a truly amazing author
| dogluvva99 chapter 4 . 1/19
You ask why we love you so much? It's because you are THE MOST epic author of all time! Duh! You are AMAZING! I don't see why you have to ask. This story is so beautifu and so detailed. There's so much depth. I can't... I'm speechless.
| Fi Suki Saki chapter 20 . 12/24/2013
It was so WOW!
Magnificent i would say...! And so Adventure!
I would say the poor characters here was Luffy and Sanji...
Luffy; coz his Dreams is his Life! When his Dreams stolen, he was like people in comatose...!
Sanji; coz his Dreams stolen TWICE! And he has work hard, since he was the only strongest one who was able to protect Nami, when Luffy and Zoro was Out...!
I wouldnot pity Nami... Since she actually already get warned...!
But i wouldnot blame her either... It's came from her personality after all... And she did get all hard work too...!
It was Great...!
But i dont really have anything to say after that...
Nice fic! ;D
| annea101 chapter 19 . 11/19/2013
omr i could picture everthing.
| annea101 chapter 16 . 11/18/2013
by ra that would be terrifing
| annea101 chapter 15 . 11/18/2013
damn. 5 more chaptors. i love your balance of close calls btw
| annea101 chapter 14 . 11/18/2013
yep and hopefully they wont be the strawhats asses being kicked
| annea101 chapter 13 . 11/18/2013
no. cuz even south is north by zoros definition everyway can be north by his def. anyways loved the scouting chapter
| annea101 chapter 11 . 11/18/2013
when i listened to namis speech in my head i said damn stright. i am in such a good mood now after watch one piece ep 522
| annea101 chapter 8 . 11/17/2013
thats cuz one piece is awesome. anyways loving the story. and i love the moment of realization
| annea101 chapter 5 . 11/17/2013
omg i now love those songs and i love how you delt with the creatures
| Anonreviewer chapter 20 . 11/17/2013
Great story. I'm glad you only asked for reviews at the end of a story. I usually never review if authors beg for them. Several things: I loved how you didn't have any of those annoying little grammatical errors. However, how would they have known how to date journals in the one piece world? I think a better way to structure it would be to provide page dividers. You had an excellent storyline. Next time, consider a (more obvious?) bigger picture. Would the bigger picture for this story be dreams are not something to be afraid of? Good will always conquer evil? I have a feeling that I'm going to be a hypocrite later on, but no matter. I didn't like how luffy didn't really have a big role in this story, except to defeat the queen at the end. It was refreshing to see more of the crew than the captain, however.
| annea101 chapter 1 . 11/16/2013
after reading this for the 4th time i yelling in my head dont do it
| BlockedForeverSorry chapter 20 . 10/28/2013
...Wow. This story... Hey, are you secretly Oda or something? I've rarely found a fanfiction of this caliber before, it's just... Amazing. Genius. The way the characters act, it feels exactly as if it were canon. I love this story so, so much, I would favorite it a thousand times over. Thank you so much for taking the time to write and complete this, I hold much respect for you, my fellow writer. Your ideas are so original... Again, thank you. :D