|Reviews for Unraveling|
| McFudge chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
Oh my gosh it was so good! I absolutely loved the psychological connection between young ziva and current ziva. It was reaaly well done! I Kinda wanna know for sure if ziva succeeds but at the same time it was a good ending and adding more would ruin it. Regardless, it was a fantastic character study and great story.
| campbellk2 chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
Amazing - the perfect place to end it!
| ChEmMiE chapter 1 . 9/25/2011
Okay, this was just brilliant! Loved the way you moved back and forth between past and present and how it was all somewhat connected!
And from the summary i'd have never guess it was about tali :)
| Agent Striker chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
that was freaking amazing. seriously, i don't even mind the ending. that was...beautiful. riveting. stunning. perfect.
| Lyzzie Rocker chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Wow. That was really good. Very . . . intense. I like it.
| mentalagent13 chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
Wow. That was excellent. The transition from past to present flowed very well. The way that she resents/loves her sister is spot on. Reactions and understanding. I am blown away. Thank you so much for writing!
| Aquasm chapter 1 . 9/19/2011
this is great!
| starryjules chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Wow. This is incredibly good. We've only seen glimpses of the amazingly rich David family backstory, and I really like what you've added to it here.
"Ziva is, without a doubt, her father's daughter. He has poured everything he is into her. And yet he loves Tali."
Beautiful, and seems so true to the Ziva we all know.
And I love the way you've set this story up - the flashbacks and repetitions are just fantastic. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
| WelcomeToLeahland xD chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Great story. It gave me a shivery spine xD
...Do they live? or is that up for us to decide?
Personally I think that Ziva cut the right wire and they live and she's happy and then Tony snogs her face off and she's even happier :P
| allyjayrunaway chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Hey. I've been gone for a while, so this is my first review being back. i absolutely loved it. with all my heart. I think you should do a follow-up chapter just so we know what happened.
| Grande chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Wow! There's no words other than "wow" left in my mind at this moment. Breathtakingly beautiful yet sad story.
| tansypool chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Oh God, I think you just shattered my heart. Absolutely stunning in every facet of the heartbreak. The lack of an ending with full closure is kind of terrifying, and I don't know what to make of it - the "one" following the wire cut makes me think that the disarming didn't work, but that's breaking my heart a little too much considering the content of the fic, so I'm in delusional happy land where it worked and they get out... just beautiful.
| Chrissy1992 chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Oh my God that story was amazing!So powerful and did a wonderful job!
| xoxonessie chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
*curling up on my bed and crying my eyes out for the rest of my days* BEAUTIFUL
| patronuses chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
Oh, this is perfection!