|Reviews for Broke|
| SweetGumdrop chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
I stayed up til1 in the morning battling sleep and exhaustion to read one of your juicy lemons... but there was none...
*has been severly disappointed*
On the other hand the Edward Cullen Sun Sparkling reference killed me! Killed me! Awesome man awesome!
| itsmegonzo chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
I love love love loved it! I wish it was longer and had gone more in-depth in what happens after. T_T I'm still totally re-reading this though!
| Painfully Aware chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
Please write. a sequel! I neeeeed it x3
| Illuminatedessence chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
That was a tease. A terrible, horrible tease.
| Spinestalker chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
So hot... Beautiful and I loved it!
| olciak123 chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
Briiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiilliant :D
| YaOi69LoVeR chapter 1 . 6/11/2012
Hot. . . -wipes drool off and tries (and fails) to gain back composure- Damn that was awesome! I loved it and it was great. I don't really care if it wasn't a full lemon it was still awesome. Must say it deserves a sequel.
| scillian chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
I loved the gai and kakashi team, they made me crack up! The sex scene was hot, I loved how Naruto got so into it. It could do with a sequel, of course, but it also stands well on its own
| sighcoe lazy to log in chapter 1 . 4/28/2012
Please... I beseech you(lol), please made a sequel. This story deserves a sequel. Not only for the lemony part, but for how Sasuke and Naruto's relationship going to develop. I wonder how Kiba will react, how Naruto would accept his attraction to Sasuke as well Sasuke's new found interest? Or is it merely an interest?
There's so much thing that can be tackled, talk, plotted for the next installation of this story, so I beg thee Reya Knight to make a new chapter after this.
| gummybear1620 chapter 1 . 3/9/2012
So, will there be a sequel? I should check your profile page after this x)
And now, I'm sorry for starting my review with something so intrusive. Anyway, this oneshot had me laughing every couple of paragraphs (except at the end, where the smutty, smexy stuff happened). Like at the beginning, where Kiba's prodding Naruto to go to 'adult entertainment' and sell himself lol. Not to mention his bajillion nicknames for girls- "sex-pants-after-me" "Long-legs" "Ride-me-to-f-ing-ecstasy"...Kiba is quite the guy, I'm thinking.
I WANT TO SEE THIS PLACE! Y.A.O.I. Quite ingenius.
And now, the star of the humor show: Maito Gai. I love how you rarely use his real name, just "Amazing Sparkler" or- well, it's a different name every time XDD You have talent, I'm saying this seriously.
I liked the real plot to this though, and it was quite delicious. Mm...I just wish there was a real lemon for me to eat x3 but author's decision!
Now excuse me for that kinda half-lame review...but brain's a little fried. Thank you for writing!
| TrappedInHappiness chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
So hot... I would love to read a sequel to this...
| Alara Phoenix chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Heehee! I love you Ex boyz story so much that I decided to read another one of your fics and fuck it was awesome! Personally I still prefere Ex boyz but this one has me thinking... You mentioned that you might let someone else write a sequel right? Hm, I'm a little interested... I'll think about it and maybe write a few ideas down before getting back to you kay? I promise I won't publish without talking to you. Hell, I think it would look better under your name anywayz... Maybe I'll give you a present? Hmm... but seriously, bad thoughts... looooots of bad thoughts... hehehe... Hmm, I wonder how long I can make the lemon... fuck, knowing me, I won't be satisfied until it's a citrus tree...
| missbip0lar chapter 1 . 1/23/2012
If you do really want to do a sequel and have someone else write the lemon, I would be up for it. If you want, you can read some of my stuff that I've written, and there are PLENTY of lemons. Let me know!
| Rizember chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
weird how all girls have slutty middle names...
do they know?
Kiba's conclusion made sense. I will be going to that building, dressed like Naruto so I can see if I'm gay. with sasuke. for scientific reasons... um...and to see if I'm a man trapped in a girl's body...
Loved Kakashi and Sai :)
-that was just sai sexually harassing you- haha...sweet.
good job on the lemon-lime... add summa that to ex-boys and I might persuade the lynching squad (me) to back off...
| yamiXyugi-setoXjou-4ever chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
sequeeelll _ ugh i wish i was any good at writing lemons coz i bet the sequel for this would be fucking awesome (literally *insert creepy perverted smile*)lol _