Reviews for The Destined Path
Anonymous chapter 11 . 4/16
Wonderfully in-character. I like how you've explored the relations and reactions between characters. Hope to see more!
Bloodwitch Raven chapter 11 . 8/13/2014
Thanks, By the way... you gonna make a crossover of Jade Empire?
Not a sequel to 'The Destined Path' of course just I can't never find what I like any more :'(
Bloodwitch Raven chapter 10 . 8/6/2014
For a second there I thought you abandon your stories. Just been awhile, I guess.
Can't wait to see when you get to the castle :D
Wendy17 chapter 9 . 5/17/2013
Szia!Mikor folytatod? Imádom a történeted, főleg a Jenzi/Sky párosítást! 1000000-szor kérlek hogy folytasd!
WENDY 17 chapter 9 . 5/3/2013
mikor folytatod? imádom a jen zi karakter !
Bloodwitch Raven chapter 9 . 3/17/2013
Ok, I like this better :)
That -what's his name- Purveyor Shouji? Jackass... but I still don't get it on 'why a bowl' ;( eh. But you make my day :D
SPARROWGIRL chapter 8 . 3/8/2013
imádom imádom imádom! csak így tovább!
Inuyashasesshy4eva chapter 8 . 3/3/2013
Welcome back

Awesome chapter cannot wait for the next, please update soon :D


Bloodwitch Raven chapter 8 . 3/3/2013
Oh shi- when?! Who's the asshole? This is the only story of Jade Empire I love :'(
cmattard22r2d2 chapter 7 . 2/21/2013
This fan fiction is unbelievable! I love it! You're a great writer! Please keep writing!
Guest chapter 7 . 7/8/2012
This is a very interesting start to the story, and definitely explains some aspects of the game that puzzled me (how *did* your companion find their way out of the tunnels in time?). I'd love to see more!
Some constructive criticism though; keep an eye on your tenses. You'll occasionally flip from past to present and such.
Dingo32 chapter 7 . 6/19/2012
This is a good chapter and a good story, there isn't enough Jade Empire fanfiction out there in my opinion, especially ones featuring Jen Zi.

And Sky putting his foot in his mouth-yes, he is quite skillful at that isn't he?
Bloodwitch Raven chapter 7 . 6/18/2012

The beginning was scary o_o funny thing, actually when I first played Jade Empire I always pick the inn. Didn't understand why. ...Til recently, I thought I try to just ignore it. Didn't know there was a difference. Lol on me :P
hajnica chapter 7 . 6/18/2012
Radiant Alexandra chapter 6 . 6/9/2012
This was a marvelous story I was hopeing that their was more but I LOVED it great job.
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