Reviews for Off the Mark
GratefullyDead chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
I'm not usually a fan of slash in fandoms where it's not clearly evident, but I thought this was a great story. You captured the characters perfectly. So, now I'm envisioning Perry and Paul together and it's quite nice! You've accomplished what to my mind is a goal of fan fiction - mind expansion. Any chance of a follow-up and/or something that hints at a threesome with our boys and Della? ;-p
tengland2 chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Expecting Della to pop up somewhere. But having reread this, I have a feeling this has taken a diffent direction. More soon please.