|Reviews for HotchScotch|
| Jean-Moddalle chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
very touching story i needed this.
| nebula2 chapter 1 . 3/14/2012
This was a cute story. I loved how you had Jack struggling over some of the bigger words. Very nice. Mr. Four-Man for the foreman had me laughing out loud! That was a nice touch. Jack is so cute! I can just picture him and his Daddy playing 'Hotch Scotch' in front of their house!
One minor criticism: I found the placement of this sentence - "They were having the exterior of their house renovated and the contractors were almost three weeks behind." - awkward. It seems out of place and I had to read the beginning a few times to understand what you were trying to convey. I think it's the fact that it's sandwiched between the dialogue that doesn't address the renovation. It might have worked better as the opening sentence.
Nice job with this!
| PaceyW'sgirl chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
really cute story!
| A Black Queen chapter 1 . 9/28/2011
Awww! This was so sweet. Love it!
| rockhotch31 chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
This made me smile. Great story!
| Angel N Darkness chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
awwww... this story made me smile and laugh... jack is just so cute! you did a great job on it... love it...