|Reviews for Multiverse|
| crocket chapter 4 . 10/7
| Mernom chapter 4 . 10/2
A little too random in my taste.
| Mernom chapter 2 . 10/1
I had a question about the chapter, but I forgot it. The only thing I can ask now is why the number of eyeballs is uneven.
| Ibskib chapter 4 . 9/22
your right - you're right
would flair - would flare
needed him - needed her
but their too young - but they're too young
ministry's involved passed - ministries involved passed
from decision - from that decision
its legal - it's legal
your thinking - you're thinking
slimey - slimy
burn you in effigy - burn effigies of you
this open to - this is open to
tied him to full - tied him to a full
they didn. - they didn't.
it's victim - its victim
| Ibskib chapter 3 . 9/22
from a certain death - from certain death
more than master anymore - more than my master now
for a hills. - for the hills.
were prettiest - were the prettiest
it's image - its image
make it to you - make it up to you
| Ibskib chapter 2 . 9/22
Noticed a number of typos and the like in this chapter:
have jealous bone - have a jealous bone
a nite - a night
it's download - its download
been patience - been patient
vanished his pinky - vanished his pinky bone
It's purpose - Its purpose
round about way - roundabout way
it's activities - its activities
relocation rare - relocation of rare
Dumbledore laying in - Dumbledore lying in
Quirrel - Quirrell
bondage servant - bond servant
Blonds - Blondes
from a suite - from a suit of armor
the curl up - they curl up
wrong satin - wrong with satin
| Ibskib chapter 1 . 9/22
ending up - ended up
| setokayba2n chapter 4 . 9/19
I liked the finis, you could make a sequel but then Hermione could not like too much the violence or going away with the rules or figures of authority
| suziq968 chapter 4 . 8/21
This was hilarious insanity. You guys are AWESOME!
| NovaSteele chapter 4 . 7/28
I'm not really sure what to say to be truthful, well, first, I would like to thank you for writing such great stories for everyone to enjy, I hope you get well soon, and I would like to wish you well. - NovaSteele
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/24
that was nice
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/24
no spells in 3 years... the last spell was a failed lumos.. he failed to cast a lumos.. what the fuck?
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/24
Ducks are actually pretty cool, look at how manly they walk! even the female ducks are manlier than men! its amazing!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/24
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/2
I was so sorry to read of Bob's passing. He will be GREATLY missed.
I send my condolences, as poor as they are.