Reviews for Multiverse
crocket chapter 4 . 10/7
Mernom chapter 4 . 10/2
A little too random in my taste.
Mernom chapter 2 . 10/1
I had a question about the chapter, but I forgot it. The only thing I can ask now is why the number of eyeballs is uneven.
Ibskib chapter 4 . 9/22
your right - you're right

would flair - would flare

needed him - needed her

but their too young - but they're too young

ministry's involved passed - ministries involved passed

from decision - from that decision

its legal - it's legal

your thinking - you're thinking

slimey - slimy

burn you in effigy - burn effigies of you

this open to - this is open to

tied him to full - tied him to a full

they didn. - they didn't.

it's victim - its victim
Ibskib chapter 3 . 9/22
from a certain death - from certain death

more than master anymore - more than my master now

for a hills. - for the hills.

were prettiest - were the prettiest

it's image - its image

make it to you - make it up to you
Ibskib chapter 2 . 9/22
Noticed a number of typos and the like in this chapter:

have jealous bone - have a jealous bone

a nite - a night

it's download - its download

been patience - been patient

vanished his pinky - vanished his pinky bone

It's purpose - Its purpose

round about way - roundabout way

it's activities - its activities

relocation rare - relocation of rare

Dumbledore laying in - Dumbledore lying in

Quirrel - Quirrell

bondage servant - bond servant

Blonds - Blondes

from a suite - from a suit of armor

the curl up - they curl up

wrong satin - wrong with satin
Ibskib chapter 1 . 9/22
small correction:
ending up - ended up
setokayba2n chapter 4 . 9/19
I liked the finis, you could make a sequel but then Hermione could not like too much the violence or going away with the rules or figures of authority
suziq968 chapter 4 . 8/21
This was hilarious insanity. You guys are AWESOME!
NovaSteele chapter 4 . 7/28
I'm not really sure what to say to be truthful, well, first, I would like to thank you for writing such great stories for everyone to enjy, I hope you get well soon, and I would like to wish you well. - NovaSteele
Guest chapter 4 . 5/24
that was nice
Guest chapter 3 . 5/24
no spells in 3 years... the last spell was a failed lumos.. he failed to cast a lumos.. what the fuck?
Guest chapter 2 . 5/24
Ducks are actually pretty cool, look at how manly they walk! even the female ducks are manlier than men! its amazing!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/24
Guest chapter 4 . 5/2
Excellent Crack-Fic!
I was so sorry to read of Bob's passing. He will be GREATLY missed.
I send my condolences, as poor as they are.
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