|Reviews for One Chance|
| elizabeth bennette chapter 13 . 2/20
please tried to give this story an ending. Thanks.
| Guest chapter 12 . 11/23/2012
| butterfly1409 chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
love the story so far hope ther more to come
| EdwardHadALittleLamb chapter 13 . 9/23/2012
Aw... That was sweet :) but I see many hardships for this couple. It was way too easy for it to be smooth sailing from there on out. Eagerly awaiting the next update!
| Sassy Mami chapter 13 . 9/7/2012
Please update more soon. Love the story and i cant wait to read more :)
| Sassy Mami chapter 1 . 9/7/2012
oh shit. Love it and Rose kicks ass. :)
| Milk And CoCoa chapter 13 . 9/2/2012
Ed isin't poor anymore you know that? right?
| Milk And CoCoa chapter 12 . 9/2/2012
Am with you, Sorry to say, this chapter was really boring
But I LOVE THE STORY!
| Milk And CoCoa chapter 11 . 9/2/2012
It got fucked up when you crashed edwards wedding bells :)LOVE IT!
| Milk And CoCoa chapter 10 . 9/2/2012
OH MY GOD!
Caught red handed...
| Milk And CoCoa chapter 9 . 9/2/2012
EDWARD IS NOT DEAD!
of cource he wouldn't be dead, why WOULD he be dead? If he was dead, does that mean the story would end...? But if that happened, why the fucking hell did you write this then? To piss the shit out of people. Actully, you can't piss shit unless it's dihoria, But that still counts as shitting... Right?
OKAY! OFF TASK! I warned you, ADD freak reading your story at the moment!
BUT I LOVE IT!
Now before I begin arguing with my self-contious again, JUST A REMINDER
I CAN'T FUCKING SPELL TO SAVE MY LIFE
so any spelling mistakes are my fault :)
OF COURCE THEY ARE BITCCH, YOU WROTE THEM!
SHUT THE FUCK UP SELF CONTIOUS!
Ignoring you now...
MILK AND COCOA OUT!
| Milk And CoCoa chapter 8 . 9/2/2012
YOU SON OF A BITCH!
YOU HURT EDWARD!
OH MY FUCKING GOD!
LOVE DA DRAMA!
| Milk And CoCoa chapter 7 . 9/2/2012
MONKEY DRY HUMPING TREES!
I HAVE TO BLEACH MY EYES! _
AND DON'T YOU FORGET IT.
The cory part is that NO TELEVISION COMPANY WAOULD LET THAT AIR ON ANIMAL PLANNET! But maybe the porn one might...
EWWWW BELLA WATCHING PORN!
I NEED TO BLEACH MY BRAIN!
| Milk And CoCoa chapter 6 . 9/1/2012
LOVE BELLS'S DOG!
I have a dog called LaLa, AFTER THE TALETUBIES! Everytime I sing this song (it's name slips my mind at the moment) it has the lalalalalala bit in it, she jumped on my face yesterday when I sang it. NOT. FUN.
Turns out you ain't the boss at dog names like me bitch!
Or maybe we're tie-breakers... who knows?
no, you don't. self-consious
YES I DO!
FLUBFLUB IS DA WINNER! WHO NAMES THERE DOG ! XD
Remembers Granma's dog, Ya, I named her, I called her puddles when she went and pissed on my leg, still called puddles. Now can you shut-up selfcontious?
Nice name bitch, BUT I AIN'T GONNA SHUT-UP TILL YOU FEED ME SOME BEN AND JERRYS!
Your practically a spirit, YOU CAN'T EAT!
FEED YOUR NEED!
SHUT-UP SELF CONTIOUS!
I'm Ignoring you now.
OKAY, Sorry bout dat, my self-contious is a little crazy.
Okay, your right, I HAVE ADD! I CAN'T KEEP A NORMAL CONVERSATION GOING! Anyway... Back to the bitch remark.
No offence right? I'm a peace keeper!
ANYWAY! EDWARD WILL KISS HER!
Thats setteled, if not, i'm going to shoot you, TONIGHT!
Thats right, I'm stalking you, and right now your looking at your computer screen and reading this reveiw
Lol, no duh your reading this!
ANYWAY! LOVE IT!
MILK AND COCOA OUT!
| Milk And CoCoa chapter 5 . 9/1/2012
Can you make Jake meet Leah and fall in "love" AND EDWARD CRASH BELLA AND JAKES DATE!
CAUSE FUCK YOU JAKE!
I'M TEAM EDWARD!