Reviews for Unintended
Rose chapter 26 . 9/20
Love the story! Thank you for sharing!
Prettysqueaky chapter 14 . 8/29
I can't recall if I read Moon Scars but I know understand why people cursed your ass out. Personally, I love the drama besides this Edward is a dick and I hope he redeems himself. But didn't Icky Vicky drop out two years ago? She can't just keep coming and leaving school like that!
jk chapter 17 . 6/3
that kid is a fucking brat and in need of a spanking and time out!
jk chapter 16 . 6/3
I'm really confused here...its like its a whole new fucking story...all of a sudden Edward can sing...and bam hes a fucking rock star...and BAM its that movie with the rock and the kid shows up...
this is fucking stupid!
jk chapter 15 . 6/3
That was really wrong of esme and Carlisle to make Edward pay for some hoes medical expenses. That is not up to them. Also they should not pay a dime until they get a DNA test, especially under the circumstances.
jk chapter 9 . 6/3
I really don't understand why no one has beat the shit out of Edward yet. I mean ya Emmett punched him...once but Edwards a fucking punk bitch...he needs his ass humbled soOOOOO damn bad. a good ass kicking could accomplish that...I don't mean a few good hits...I mean like near death...just saying
Burning4Peeta chapter 26 . 5/18
I read this story a few years ago. Back then I loved it and I still do.
RingTheBella chapter 15 . 4/7
I just left to read the alternate ending because a friend told me how long Edward is gone and I was not terribly happy about that so I decided to read the alternate ending first. Now I'm going to read the original ending and see which one I like better. She absolutely adores the original version and was not too thrilled with the alternate version. I suspect that I will be the other way around... let's find out.
RingTheBella chapter 14 . 4/6
wouldn't put it past her to slip him Viagra and some other kind of drug to make him loopy and rape him in order to get pregnant or the baby's not his at all
RingTheBella chapter 5 . 4/6
did not think she would let him get that far so early in the "relationship"... but then again they are teenagers and don't think things through so much like adults do
RingTheBella chapter 1 . 4/6
did not think she would let him get that far so early in the "relationship"... but then again they are teenagers and don't think things through so much like adults do
RingTheBella chapter 2 . 4/6
I've read stories where Edward is an ass before but... wow
Djejdjdjendkd chapter 26 . 3/21
What a great feel good story. Been having a hard time and I needed one about now so thank you. Very well written !
Guest chapter 17 . 1/13
This story IS getting a bit silly. These last two chapters, at least. I'll keep reading, but the interactions everybody has is pretty juvenile (not just Edward and Rapunzel).
Guest chapter 12 . 1/10
Why was "my boyfriend is English" in italics? And it would be trunk, not truck, btw.
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