|Reviews for Unintended|
| Janet Garrett chapter 7 . 4/30
That is even worse than a one Night Stand...
| Janet Garrett chapter 4 . 4/29
Girl, this is an older story that i just ran upon and now I'm on my second read of this very entertaining Tale of two Lovers finding themselves. This is great!
| Commentra-DannySxx chapter 15 . 1/16
Really wish I could continue reading but I just can’t, all kinds of wrong IMO. I had to read the reviews to see what happens and can see Bella ends up keeping the baby after she drove Edward away? And 10 years? 10? Not a couple months 10 years? No can’t do it. Liked it up to here though love
| Pissed off chapter 15 . 7/7/2020
Fuck you and this stupid waste of time story.
What is wrong with my with you posting shit like this without a warning? I’m never reading any of your garbage again!
| debb lavoie chapter 26 . 6/29/2020
As usual you gave me a fantastic ending. Nicely done.
| debb lavoie chapter 24 . 6/29/2020
Why didn't Bella say, hey, I'm leaving Jacob. No she packs a bag. They need to talk to each other. Kids...
| debb lavoie chapter 19 . 6/29/2020
I'm pissed at Bella. She keeps the baby and never let's Edward know. He would have stayed
| debb lavoie chapter 18 . 6/29/2020
Oh wow, nice twist.
| debb lavoie chapter 16 . 6/29/2020
Ya, I always hated that name. So nobody adopted her?
| debb lavoie chapter 15 . 6/29/2020
Edward should fight for his son. Now that they're married. Ugh, so damn sad.
| debb lavoie chapter 12 . 6/28/2020
I feel badly for Edward. He thinks he will do the same as his father.
| debb lavoie chapter 11 . 6/28/2020
Oh how the tables have turned.
| debb lavoie chapter 10 . 6/28/2020
Yep, he's being a little s##t.
| debb lavoie chapter 9 . 6/28/2020
This marriage is good for anyone. The money should have been split and then Bella could do as she wished.
| debb lavoie chapter 8 . 6/28/2020
Wow. Edward is a nasty piece of work.