Reviews for Unintended
Guest chapter 17 . 1/13
This story IS getting a bit silly. These last two chapters, at least. I'll keep reading, but the interactions everybody has is pretty juvenile (not just Edward and Rapunzel).
Guest chapter 12 . 1/10
Why was "my boyfriend is English" in italics? And it would be trunk, not truck, btw.
OcSickGirl chapter 1 . 8/26/2016
Finally getting around to reading this. Edward is such a prick!
Nat chapter 12 . 7/27/2016
Love this story
harkie5 chapter 26 . 3/26/2016
I loved it!
Guest chapter 5 . 2/24/2016
I almost thought he was so close to winning the that was a job I'm so excited to read the next chapter.
azilized chapter 26 . 2/17/2016
I've just finished this story. I've loved the beginning, a bit less the last chapters, too much fluff for my taste... But I thank you for bringing to life these characters once again.
Knit Bug chapter 26 . 1/29/2016
I liked this story a lot- the time jump threw me for a loop, but I loved it still. So much. Thank you for writing this great story.

Guest chapter 26 . 1/18/2016
Wonderful story.
Guest chapter 18 . 1/17/2016
I can be a witness to this happening. My friend baby was suppose to be a boy also. Baby grace was born instead.
Bambii25 chapter 12 . 1/5/2016
"My boyfriend is English." Best line in the whole story
Bambii25 chapter 6 . 1/5/2016
Is "Laurence" supposed to be Laurent?
rimalem chapter 26 . 4/1/2015
Am taking ur words literally and gonna go read ur other work. Btw, since I am reviewing, this story surprised me. Was actually looking for a different story with a similar title. Loved ur writing style and now, gonna go see how much i'd love ur other stuff. Thx!
Rose chapter 26 . 1/16/2015
I absolutely enjoyed reading this story! Thank you so much for sharing this :)
Debra doo chapter 13 . 12/14/2014
Awe, asshole is growing a heart!
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