Reviews for Book II: Beyond the Horizon
R.S.L chapter 17 . 1/28
carbuncle's my fav in FF9 that one's the cuttess one the there ones they looked like lizards not cute at all i always thought carbuncle was a girl
R.S.L chapter 13 . 1/27
eiko: mog were u going? mog..? mog: k-kupo! eiko: MOG! sigh stuck on a branch betrayaled by my own trusted moogle is this how i meet my end? MOG IM GONNA HUNT U IF I DIE HERE! XDD i love eiko
R.S.L chapter 12 . 1/27
the wedding was a nother one of my favs in the game it was as cute as it was funny XD
R.S.L chapter 7 . 1/27
YAY THERE ALIVE!
R.S.L chapter 4 . 1/27
i think the feather thing is his hair an also shiva? PUT SOMETHING ON! heres a spell from the lion wars game: wind fade 2 silence and light give us power SHIVA! XD
R.S.L chapter 4 . 1/27
DID GARNET JUST SAY A BAD WORD!? O.O
R.S.L chapter 3 . 1/26
what happen 2 the knights that helped them? did they die...? T-T also i thought the 1 who showed them the town was a female
Shadow knight1121 chapter 17 . 12/24/2011
Great chapter this was always my favorite scene in the game and you wrote it perfectly merry christmas dude..
Shadow knight1121 chapter 16 . 12/17/2011
Great chapter man don't worry so much about dialogue that's a key point that makes a story interesting.
Shadow knight1121 chapter 15 . 12/10/2011
Great chapter man you really are good at what you do. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Shadow knight1121 chapter 14 . 12/3/2011
Great chapter good job with sinais mom and the phoenix I can't wait for your next chapter.
Shadow knight1121 chapter 13 . 11/25/2011
Great chapter man I liked the battle between the giant and eidolons great work touchy ending too can't wait to de sinai and his mother together at last.
Shadow knight1121 chapter 12 . 11/18/2011
Great chapter and thanks for all the reviews.

1st: I think everyone loves vivi.

2nd: I like your story and got a little inspiration from you hence Ken.

3rd: I wanted my FF to be a little unique so instead of a gamer being trapped in a game and knowing everything but still following the sequence.

4: Ami, Jayden and the phenix will be explained in time.

5: assassins creed is a great game and when Mario told Ezio not to cus and show respect I kind of wanted to base something off him.

Thanks again for reading and great story you have please continue soon. Peace love shadow.
Shadow knight1121 chapter 11 . 11/12/2011
Good chapter great work on that Gaia speech gave me some ideas for future chapters can't wait for your next chapter.
Shadow knight1121 chapter 10 . 11/11/2011
Great chapter man, it sucks that you don't have more readers your story is genius can't wait until the next chapter.
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